very beautiful. it sounds very realistic, like i think that this is what happened in real life hahaha im rambling.

Chapter 1: YOU HUUUUUUUURT ME

Chapter 1: Wow. Wow. Wow. The feels ahhhhhh. It's like i can feel how Tao's so broken becausd of what happened and then there's chanyeol who's willing to wait for him *^* I felt sad for Yifan too though, especially when he came home to an empty apartment *^* But ahhhh just wow. I love this ♡♡♡

Chapter 1: Well ...
I must congratulate you for being able to break my heart into a million pieces, but managed to get them back together midway.
Holy , what I love about this is that, it's so vivid and it's so natural. Very realistic, and just, wow. Seriously. WOW.
I love Chanyeol, and I love him even more here, but gah. Precious lil Taozi is forever precious.
Oh , this is why this pairing deserves more love ;;;;
Yay Chantao ; u ;
I swear if I could only give you 10 upvotes, I would ;;

Chapter 1: it's really... really... what i've to say...
i love the way chanyeol start over zitao.
both of them are too cute to handle aaaw.
suddenly forget about yifan

Chapter 1: Wow. If I could just write four characters, I would have kept it at "wow.", but oh well.
This is so pretty and perfectly sad. I just.

Wow.

Chapter 1: Cute...sad...beautiful...pain...is all in this story. Love it ^^

Chapter 1: The last part had me like "oooOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIZZZZ"

Chapter 1: Hahaha wow
I remember the good old days when I was still alive but then I read this fanfiction called After You and it killed me
It literally killed me
I'm talking about this fanfiction
this fanfiction murdered me

Chapter 1: it was kind of sad but it was cute too ;) good job!