Don't, Please don't

Description

Hey, I am back with a new category of story, the Spartace couple! Well, I been influence by the one that I like (which I haven't confess to her because I am a coard) to watch Runningman and in the series, I realize that I favor Spartace couple more than Monday couple. And since I was watching an episode where they cross the Han River, so I have an idea.. This story will be a 3-4 with the maximum 5 chapters. 

And I will upload my other's story for those who have been supporting my other YulSic fic. XD

 

p/s: this story will be in the angsty category. 

 

Foreword

What if we strongly refuse that mission? Maybe somehow the outcome will change. 

What if we didn't go and protest about the water games? Maybe we wouldn't suffering right now.

What if we sensed it earlier from the writers of the programme that they are hiding something when they negotiate with us? Maybe we won't be as guilty as now.

What if.....

Ah, there's too many 'what if' I can think of but I am just a mere human with no superpowers. I can't go time travel, and travel back to that day, that peculiar day where all this happen.

Please, just please, let me beg you once with all my heart and soul that don't, please don't let go. 

And please, please come right now because I am scare that I am going to break myself anytime now.

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Nechilove
#1
Chapter 4: So emotional...
cry and wide smile appear when i read this
so romantic
good job author nim
ainali #2
Chapter 4: a romantic and sad story but I like it.hehehe
Mithani
#3
Chapter 4: thank you for your hard working author nim
runningheroes #4
hi! just read your story, and it was so heartbreaking i cried a lot. it's a great fanfic and i truly enjoyed reading it :) I've been trying to find a fanfic where there's lots of tension and feels kind of angsty, and this really fulfilled my needs as a reader.

by the way, author-nim, the storyline was really thoughtfully made and was enjoyable while being really sad and angsty. one thing though, the last chapter was quite confusing to me, since the place setting wasn't clear. another thing would be, well, i think the sobbing/panting sounds would be easier to read if you used dots instead of dashes(-). but overall, i loooooove this fic!

Thank you sooooo much for the story!
naarnia07 #5
Authornim.....u'r story is daebak. I keep crying & my tears keep flowing.
It is already loo.....ng ago i had myself cry from deep of my heart while read a story.
p/s: sorry for the grammar......
spartace_jjang
#6
i...i am crying .... i have been reading it the third time but ma tears are still flowing...i just simply love ur story...authornim pls more spartace stories :DDD
NovitaSuryamin #7
Please update "It's not the same" fanfic.
Spartacehaven
#8
Chapter 4: OMG! Your ending was so cute! I loved it. I loved how you combined their a given names into their son's name. Funny, just how you described their son to be I've pictured their son to be too. Ji hyo's big eyes and jong kook's lips and nose. Handsome little liger. I'm a er for baby fics. Your was the cutest. I can't wait to read another one. Keep up the great work!
boboy100 #9
Chapter 4: thank you very much..
Maxxz7 #10
plez update soon..i want to know what happen next..huhu