Chapter 7: Well I'm a new reader and I know that the title said that this story is discontinued. But this story caught my eyes with it's intro and character descriptions. It sounded so interesting that I couldn't resist not to start reading the story.
Since the little mermaid was one of my favourite Disney movies of all time, I really enjoyed reading the story. And I love how you interpreted the story in your own version. Of course with Infinite members. And I also like that you changed the story line and make it a totally different story based on the same idea of the original story. I understand if you don't have time to continue the story, but to say that you are a horrible authour is wrong, because if someone can make a story so interesting sounding like this one, that person is not a bad author at all. I don't know why you lost fate and confidence to continue writing this story.
What I see is different. Based on this story you are a very good author, you are able to describe each scene well and describe the feelings of each character in detail. The most exciting thing a reader has when reading a story is too feel with the characters of the story and the author should be able to describe those feelings well. Your story is still in the beginning, but it is already exciting because the reader already understand and know each characters personality, as well as how each characters feel and what their intention is. Your story doesn't feel like things happening too fast or too slow. Everything feels realistic and the characters don't tend to overreact like I feel in some other stories. Also your English is good which makes the story even more intersting to read.
This is my opinion though, but I believe if you continue this story a lot of people will appreciate. If you don't have time it's ok, but please have more confident in your wrinting skills. ;) You are not a horrible author! ;)
interesting story~ i wonder how myungjong will get close seeing that sungjong is mute :o haha i agree with ChibiBabyXx, woohyun makes a perfect sea witch lol
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