Texts and Angel Feathers

Description

Chanyeol finds it hard to keep track of something as infinite as time when he only has a finite amount of texts and angel feathers to hold on to.

 

Rating: Pg-13...?

Main Pairings: Chanyeol/Baekhyun

Length: chaptered [approximately 49.5k words (total)] | complete

Warnings: [[ ...Character death? ]]

 

Foreword

[[This was originally posted as an entry for the Memoirs of Chanbaek contest at this location, and if you haven't read the fics there yet, you should becuase they're really good! ^_^]]

 

This was supposed to be a three-shot. Somehow it became nine chapters.

I really don't know how that happened.

 

~Spanish translation (by baekhyeol): >here<

 

A/n: So I changed the tags c: (because I'm really super sorry about that *apologizes a hundred thousand times*)

I also added like 500 words at the end some time after I had already turned it in for MOC, so if you read the story during the contest, you might want to check out that tiny little blurb at the end too.

Also! Kris is involved in this story. If Kris' presence bothers you, I advise you not to read it. If it doesn't, however, carry on ^^

 

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pjloverj #1
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us. It poked my heart, twisted it, left me a crying mess and yet I feel like t is probably something I needed to read while in grief. I try to avoid angst/death stories but it's chanbaek.....I was starting to fear where t was going but your writing made me continue. I can relate to Chanyeol so much and writing this makes tears start again.... Kudos to you and gain, thank you for writing.
after_dark #2
A lot of spelling errors in my comment but you know what i mean lol
after_dark #3
Chapter 9: SPOILER!! DON'T READ THIS IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE STORY YET. THIS IS JIST FEEBACK FOR THE AUTHOR.
by the way this is jist feefback on what i though of the characters and story. Im not trying to take a dig at you. Youre an amazing author. I love all your stories and im literally obsessed with everything you write. Im not hating just wann make that super clear lol

I love your writting. Its really easy to follow and understand. Great idea. The way chapter was split up was great. The story was really sad i cried like baby esp whenever cy would breakdown. I cried extra hard when he tried to kiss kyungsoo omg. I had to put my phone down and compose myself. I liked that at the beginning we didint know who was writting the journal or what wad going to happen next. I was hooked and i honestly couldnt put my phone down till i finished. Took my three hours to read lol. I didnt want it to finish. You put a lot of time and it shows.


bUT I COULDNT STAND SOME CHARACTERS especially my very own biad BYUN FREAKING BAELHYUN'S CHARACTER. He was selfish. So soo selfish. And even after all he did Baek got to ERASE his memories. Thats so unfair lol. If they cant be together i feel like they should of erased both of their memories. For chanyeol even if they dont erase his love for baek i feel like they shouldve erased the time in which baekhyun was his guardian angle. If you think about it chanyeol was finally moving on with his life. He was starting to accept that baek was dead and was starting to let go. He had an amazing boyfriend/roommate who liked him alot. Who was teaching him to love again to open his heart even a little bit. Who was patient with him despite being told no mutiple times. But who ruined it? Baekhyun! All bc he was jealous and selfish. Like i wanted to rip my hair out. Between the two of them u cant deny chanyeol suffered the most and thats understandable bc he lost someone he loved. I cried more for cy. I felt soo bad for him and even after baek got his memories erased he still suffered which is depressing as

But baek was totally fine. He was in heaven he had friends . He was an angel. He got to see chanyeol everyday. He could touch him, visit him in his dreams omg. Chanyeol had no one. The love of his life was dead. I mean yeah he had his family and kaisoo but jongin was an to him when he needed him most and kyungsoo was the reason baek died lol. He only had kris who tried to understand him and baek ruined that and bc of him messing in his head and his dreams, he pushed kris away andwent back to being depressed again. Even more so than before. Like how freaking selfish can you get? I mean yeah in the end he (baek) did make a great sacrife but even that wasnt really a sacrifice. He got his memorises earsed so no more pain and suffering. He got to keep xuichen and luhan his friends. He also got a promotion. Like a big promotion. What?? Meanwhile cy still remembers everything. dae even told him not to forget. To remember baek forever. Huh?? Why??

For me the pefect ending would be if fate and destiny decided to erase their memorise, they should've both gotton their memories erased. That would've been sad but chanyeol would finally find happiness.

OR for an extreamly sad ending,

baekhyun kept his memories but got a different job. A job in which he couldnt physically see chanyeol ever again. (That would've been hella tragic.) Doesnt find love again (until he meets chanyeol again ofc)

chanyeol would keep his memories too. Doesnt ever find love again either bc he loves baek too much to let go

jongdae: gets a different job, away from baek and minseok. Gets to keep memorises

minseok: (im sorry minnie) should've had his powers taken away from him. Not only did he mess up cb AND gave his ring to baek which makes it partly his fault but he got no punishment? He doesnt even get to live with the guilt for allowing baek to get killed and ruining cb. I mean wasnt he their matchmaker? He didnt even care lol. He was a really ty friend.

Jongdae was really sweat. And he was my favorite character. He always looked out for baek, cheered him up he tried to help baek move on. This is cb story i know and i ship cb BUT if baek ended up with jongdae, and yeol ended with kris i honestly wouldn't even be mad.

Thank you for writting this story i really enjoyed it
ZeLLuu_Baek7 #4
Chapter 10: Okay so I promised myself that I will never ever read angst or tragedy again like two years ago because I am such a crybaby when it comes to Baekyeol in angsty situations (my heart breaks so many times reading like that) AND I know that this fic is from 2014... BUT today in 2018 I stumbled upon this and somehow I started to read it... EVEN THOUGH I CRIED THE WHOLE ATLANTIC AND I couldn't move for hours I don't regret a single second BECAUSE seriously this story is such a piece of art!!! Every word in this fanfiction is just perfect! Your writing style is simply amazing and you did such a fantastic job authornim! ♡
Thank you so much for creating this beautiful Chanbaek masterpiece *bows* I am truly thankfully that so wonderful stories exist! THANK YOU ♡ and I hope you have a great day~
yeoldaaa #5
This is so beautiful. Thank you.
baharex #6
Chapter 9: Four years and I dont think I'll ever be able to forget this fic.
Happy new year author-nim.
byunnie16 #7
Chapter 9: it's been almost ..3 years(??) since i've read this from MOC ..i still can't believe even though I already know what's going to happen once i started rereading this for the nth time, I still love this like i've read this for the first time . thank you for this beautiful fanfic


till i come back again to read this someday :') maybe next year? and the next?? and the next one after that??
goldensuho #8
Chapter 10: I had forgotten how much I loved this when I first read it. What a a beautiful, beautiful story. These swollen eyes and this awful headache after crying so hard bc of this are super worth it!
naty_kkaebsong #9
Chapter 10: I can't believe this made me cry so much , it's unbelievably beautiful. Like every sentence just made me so emotional and I can't really say enough how much I appreciate and love this story. The anguish was real, the sadness was real but so was the happiness. The ending was really good, I think it couldn't have been better. Great writing style it's so well written. I think this story is just perfect. Thank you so much for writing this, I really appreciate your efforts. Lots of love ♡♥♡
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