Chapter 1: Awww that's unpredictable
Lucky gukkie lol xD

Chapter 1: That was so cute
I hope that you do an extra chapter

Chapter 1: Oh that is so cute!!! Cuteness overloaded!

Chapter 1: Really cute

Chapter 1: Kyaaaakkk! The ending was just so adorable! Omaigawd i love you for making this. Though this is short, this is so cute ♥

Chapter 1: nope, one big nopenopenope. sorry, but it isn't a fanfic. it looks like a record of some internet conversation. and, for zeus sake, zelo is almost 18 years old but he and his hyungs act like 10 years old tops. please, stop reading mangas (where uke acts like disabled man) and read more books instead. i can see you are young and don't have much experience, that's why don't give up.

Chapter 1: hhmm..pretty

Chapter 1: Awwww. Sooo cute zelo~`

Chapter 1: awwwwwwww it's so cute baby jello is a crybaby hehehe ^o^
nice one friend ~~~~~~ :)