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Chapter 4: still absolutely adore this story.
The magic keeps on working. I love, love, love, love, LOVE IT! *^_^*
Never want your chapters to end <3

Chapter 3: oh god > _ < I've got to the end of the story so far!! Didn't want it to end. I could spend hours and hour reading this.

And proof of what i was saying in my comments. Here's a small list of things never thought about/ known / feminine in story.
ITs so educational.

*His was pretty clear back then like Youngbae's was. - seman changes substancy? colour? filling? really? ..... do girls know this secret stuff or am i the only one who doesn't?

They brushed teeth, and took a bedtime whiz - very boyish in mental focus

it felt like his balls were coming up through his - is this how boy feels? is this secret inside information? ....are you secretly a boy with a GDYB crush? like seriously my veins are pulsing with fantasy cos i don't know this stuff!

They came after a while, but their hardons didn't go down because they needed to piss. - again...secret inside information or you're boyfriends tells you stuff and you're clever enough to include it all for male characters.. girls don't know this stuff to write about...

So whatever you're doing you're building up this thrilling fantasy with all you inside knowledge that most of don't know about and it feels like I've got a secret male GDYB fanfic diary.. You're doing something special and i'm hooked to hell. PLEASE update soon, i cant wait. i really cant.

I'm sure a female could right this standard of realness, as i'm presuming you are a girl, and i don't like to claim a female couldn't but... the effect you got going on is so thrilling. it really is.

Chapter 2: raw and authentic and real and very masculine minded which two gay lovers would be. females write their characters with the thought processes of females... this feels like you might be a boy, and as i read it, and i could probably investigate myself from you profile, i know you're probably a girl but sometimes my eyebrow quirks and i think....... but are you though?

And i don't mean to be rude or insulting, what im trying to say is that its so different, new and fresh and raw and genuine that its SO EXCITING and thrilling. I don't know what you're doing but i love it. IT feels like I'm reading a boy's secret fanficion diary and that's the adrenaline rush with your story. I simply love that feeling, so whatever you're doing, please don't stop. ITs awesome.
most of us have to go up to , twincest, and murder fics to get that same pulsing thrill of seducing what you shouln't have (because gay is too 'normal' now)...but YOU achieve that same high thrill in the just the way you're writing it.

my heart is pulsing because you got some kind of 'effect' going on (boy's mind) effect.

I absolutely love it.
And holy damn is Bae is uke then this would be more than perfect, it would be heaven. trust me.

Chapter 2: i really love this story, I got the last chapter left to read yet, but i love all the new things you have included in it. I'm reading this thinking 'this is inspiring me to add so much MORE perspective to my own written scenes'.
You're writing isn't perfect and hell i know that feeling, I write my stories quick and cry and rip my hair out editing for 90% time longer than i created the damn thing, but with you...you few unflowing grammar mistakes adds to the thrill that a 'boy' has written it, and i don't know why it makes a difference that it feels like a boy has written it but it feels more 'authentic' if you get me. Everything you have going on with your story to focus and just how its written is so thrilling. I know you're probably a girl but it feels 'authentic' like you could be one of the boys writing his events in a diary. I don't know how you're doing it, but you absolutely winning and don't stop! this feels so real and genuinely natural rather than a moulded shaped story and you're teaching me new ways of looking at how to write scenes because you showing me to add so many more things i never thought about before. for me, this story is inspiring just for good story writing tips. you're opening my eyes and making me look in a new light at how to convey without being stale and boring. Because i don't know what coming, because everything feels so new and refreshing, its exciting to read because i don't know what to expect, anything could literally happen. ITs not guessable. You can guess a typical feminine felt story, you can guess the dialogue and the order of ual events and whos will be mentioned as big (the seme) whil precious uke is angelic with no descriptive to him in comparison to the other. balls wont get mentions, they get forgotten because we don't have them to really remember them... we'll be more looking along the lines of giving our uke a sob story and making him innocent. But some how you make everything seem like.......

Chapter 2: Absolutely not weird!! I LOVE JI ON BAE!! I crave Bae as uke and I ing love this story. GDYB is my favourite and Ji my natural uke but recently this last year ive craved Bae as uke even over Ji and the stories just aren't there. I love the way round you got it.
Don't take me as being rude but are you a girl? I feels like i'm reading something written by a boy. And that is not meant to insult you. The feels raw and experienced by someone who 'knows' a boy's minds and interests. Like its written by someone who has the right equipment and male mind concerning focus. You've got stuff in here most women don't think to write about. Because we don't have the right body. Men tend to like , balls and cumshot, while women focus on the drama of the story and writing like a flow chart of events in mundane order. I've had male friends write me fanfiction in the past with Miyavi & Battle Royale and being dyslexic often as males are they find the writing hard but the story focus is so raw and REAL and male perspective its such a thrill to read. They add stuff you never thought about including before. They write it in a different way, make sure both party's pieces are pleasantry and who's balls hang longer than the others, because men find 'good pieces' on each character a turn on whereas women tend to write mental thought focused ideas and not make any body comparisons especially for their uke.. You have very instinctive male minded interaction, there's no crying at the park under a pink moon and protective seme moves in for the kiss. It's I want his arse i'm gonna go for him like a man would in the natural world.
When I read ur chapters the thrills inside me just soar because every thing from perspective to ual focus to activity is different to normal like i'm reading it from the horses mouth, a real boy's mind, and I know your probably a girl...but how are you so cleverly creating this 'raw & real' feeling like u hav inside information to true events?

Chapter 3: sweet and y GDYB!! YoungBae clueless is so cute!! I can't wait for more GDYB hot moments!!

whatever happens in your life just I hope things go your way!

Chapter 2: THIS IS WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT!
This is GDYB :3 Okay, i don't ship them, but i always enjoy reading a good GDYB and this story has it :D I am impressed :D Good job :D i really see them getting all ual :D
A little thing that i would like...youngBae on top because Ji is such a bottom sometimes and...maybe youngbae trying to experiment with other boys...Seungri maybe :3 [ i like BaeRi, a lot] :D
but anyway thx for the updates, hope you update fast :D

Chapter 2: Agree!! It's innocent and at the same time!! I love it!
Definitely looking forward for the next update

Chapter 2: I love !!!! I need more, more gdyb
Ahahaha♡_♡