Melt My Frozen Heart

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Vampire??? Are those creature really exist??

Yes they are

And to make things worse...they are the master and human are only their pure slave or should i say...their food and drink

What if....a two twin who is a half vampire and half human exist and they have the sweetest blood ever..

What if....they are the vampire true companion...will the vampire give in or will they froze their heart entirely....

Its all happen when those cold blood creature meet their true companion who will keep on fighting..which made this whole journey interesting....^^

Foreword

Haieom...

This is my second fanfic which still be super natural thingy...hehehe

Now after wolf..i think of making a dark kind of story which involved vampire...

I hope you guys will like this story though...

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Samuraimama #1
Chapter 24: Read this story from start till chapter 24 in one go and enjoyed it very much!
devilblack98 #2
Chapter 24: Well you know what ? If being on your shoes , I will just said ' you ! You don't know what writing is ! ' then pray for them to burn in the deepest hell . And one more thing . Where are those tard come form ? Eventough my native language is english and mandrin , I don't think its good to mock other poeple effot . Just .... go and keep going on your story ! I'm supporting you gal ! Do your best ! Make them feel annoyed :)
ohelss #3
Chapter 23: author i hope you update this story soon and with the bad remarks you get sent just know that a few bad apples doesn't represent the whole group :)
ms11ww #4
Chapter 23: Okay so you have one hater and alot of people who love your story sooo screw him really your story is good keep on and update soon please
Pandalover1234 #5
Chapter 23: OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! HWAITING!!!:)
ziva1234 #6
Chapter 23: Haters gonna hate! Don't listen to them. Your story is awesome
Evak_1234 #7
Chapter 23: Hey hey hey ignore them ok
they're not worth it... They're jealous.. They just want to let you down...I mean who text other people just to tell them mean things *i just hate those kind of people* so don't listen to them ok ... Even if they don't like your story there's us who like it...
mangaxkpop #8
Chapter 23: People these days...you see this all the time online. But I bet that they can't say it to you face to face. Cowards.
Anyways, I wonder if there's a report system or something here on AFF. Block the users as well.
Author-nim, the more you write and read, the more you'll improve. Keep doing what you LOVE. Don't let others tell you what to do.
And you can always ask/look for a beta.
Thanks for the chapter. :D
Cagachan04 #9
Chapter 23: You do understand that those people are just immature and more than likely, envious? Envy twists into jealousy. And jealousy creates hate. Your story is well written and different from other vampire au fics. Most people who write stories aren't strong enough to share them world wide. Props and major kudos to you for sharing yours! Looking forward to the next chappie.
Lacoursiere #10
Chapter 23: Just ignore them... they are crazy
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