Sub-Prime Extinction

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In a ravaged, future world, Byunghyun is a member of a small group of survivors living in the harsh wasteland.  The most recent to be 'adopted' by a ragtag group of young men living on their own merits, he doesn't know exactly where he fits in yet in the scheme of things.  He's always been self-sufficient, even before the world fell apart, but all he really wants now... is a reason to keep moving forward.

Foreword

                No one knew why the thing that was supposed to save humanity and make them almost invulnerable was the very thing that killed off the vast majority of the population.  The engineered super booster was supposed to eliminate most, if not all, genetic weaknesses in the human form.  Initial tests were promising but when it was approved for mass distribution, the booster mutated, altering its form and purpose as it became an airborne pathogen instead.  After the first wave of deaths, all the humans knew was that everyone was dying and if they were going down, the rest of the world would too.  Humanity as they knew it tore itself apart trying to find a cure… and only succeeded in demolishing almost all semblances of civilization, laying waste to any chance of a better future.

                A year later, not much has changed.  Most of the populous is dead and the only ones still living are young men and women who fall into a very specific age range.  Ironically, the only persons who proved to be immune to the virulent strain were those children, really, that science would have labeled as in their physical prime.

                The survivors figured those between the ages of seventeen and twenty two for males and fourteen and eighteen for females, with some minor exceptions near that age range, were spared.  Any person with a crippling genetic abnormality, however, was targeted regardless of age.

                So what happens to the survivors of a decimated world when they themselves are little more than children? 

 

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Reviewed by MadChen at Forbidden Dreamers.

This story has been entered into The Lion's Den Writing Contest for Short Story entry.

 

  1st Runner-Up in the Best in Action category in the 2016 World of Literature FanFiction Awards.

 

*a/n - So a friend of mine has a resistance (in her defense it is justly earned) to RickJoe as a pairing.  This is my answer to that reluctance.  Hopefully I can do the pair some justice!  lol

Amalya
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girafa #1
Chapter 11: loved, but can't stop think what will happen, is it all? Very good by the way , but just a bit more cause i just loved reading it.
-Tigress-
#2
Chapter 11: Omo what a perfect ending! Very much my kind of halfway closed but very much still open ending, I love it! This entire story has been such a lovely, fun, amusing and edge of my seat read,mom very glad that I decided to read it next!!! I look forward to more stories in this verse but as is, this one is fantastic. Thanks for sharing it with us all!!!
-Tigress-
#3
Chapter 10: Waking up in he morning , the end. Lol. But I loved this chappie, the aftermath and neat wrapping up of it all. I am so nervous about the next one bing the last, though!!!
The sleeping moment and how he chased away is nightmares.... Awwwwwww.
And here: in the sentence where they stop for the night and Minsoo is talking, he says I'm worry instead of sorry.

I am so beyond reluctant for this to end, you have no idea!!!
-Tigress-
#4
Chapter 9: Oh my gosh I have so much to say!!,
the whole fight, I was just riveted. It was so detailed and yet not so much that it took away from the sense of urgency. When Joe went to help Chunji I was on the edge of my seat, knowing that with his wounds he wouldn't be able to do much good. But OH Ricky! *hugs him*. He saved them all, it seems! And thn Joe... I could so see that last bit of the fight, him angry and the rope and despite being injurd... Ugh. It was quite the powerful scene, and yet you went and trumped it with the ending scene of them all holding one another. "another entirely to be attacked by men." Ugh I can't even. Well done.
One bit: You said away twice in the sentence that stars with "Gyah!"
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 8: I crieeeeeeed otl so sad *sniffles*
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 7: Wah~~~~ the feels! The whole infection was handled so well by you and the things they had on hand, I was cheering with Ricky's find in the closet. Oh but the cleansing was so bad >.<. Poor Joe!!! I really enjoyed the switch into Minsoo's POV, it was nice to see things from th leader's perspective and also to learn a little more about the brothers themselves. It was sad but this world is basically set up that way. T.T. I'm just glad they have/had each other from the get-go <3
And this last bit! Oh I flailed in total happiness! I'm so glad and it was adorable, particularly the talking bit. when Joe squeezed back I gasped like a fool haha... And then Ricky's comment about him being his angel was just totally shippable. . Why do you make me ship ships I never did?!? Lol
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 3: Wow talk about dangerous. Was it just the passing of time that had the buildings so unstable or was there another reason? Either way, ugh that's Ricky's fault. And now I am anxious to see what happened to Changjo and Niel! Off for now though so =(
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 2: Okay it's official, I adore Joe in this. I mean yeah he's my bias so that was bund to happen but OH the way you portrY him is so well done! Ricky's story is so sad, and I can't help but to think that there is no hope for her. But now he has a new family and I'm pretty sure Joe isn't going to let nothing bad happen to his 'cute companion'. Haha
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 1: Ah as always I can tell I am going to become addicted to this story. I can't wait to read more! The intro you gave us was so bleak and painted the world really well, it's as if I could see it with my own eyes. Anti-hero Joe seems sweet and I loved the reaction to being called an angel. I'll admit to being curious about the world in general but I will refrain from asking questions since, well, this is a completed story and what with you being the author, I am sure I'll have my answers soon. =D
So! Here's looking forward to getting more reading time!!
blue_deer
#10
Chapter 11: I stumbled about this fic by accident and thought the topic seemed interesting and I should read it. I don't even normally listen to Teen Top and I kept postponing it, but now I finally read it and God, I loved every single word. The characters are awesome, especially L.Joe and his struggle with his feelings. I love the way you use your words, your writing style is drawing me in. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful fic, I'll make sure to recommend it in the future.
And now I'm going to see if there are other stories written by you xD