Without letting me say 'I love you'

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I was a hopeless blind guy. I hated everything - My life, my family, and even the whole world. I believed that life is unfair. I believed that it's purpose is to make miserable people suffer alot more. I often asked myself- why me? There are alot of people more deserving to be punished! What did I do wrong to get a life like this? 

Until, a ray of sunshine and rainbows entered my life. Yes, a special girl appeared in my miserable life. Oh, how annoying she was! - I thought to myself. She was an irritating girl who kept throwing rainbows and happiness everywhere, insisting me to be friends with her. I was SO annoyed that I even thought of throwing her into the ocean. But little did I know that this same girl would change my life forever. Yes, she was my ray of sunshine and hope indeed. Until I......

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This is my entry for the EXOplosion writing contest.

You may please join if you're interested. :))

 

I've thought hardly about this oneshot and i'd request for you to not copy it.

This is my first oneshot so I really worked hard on this one. May you please enjoy my story. Thank you :D

 

 

 

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sociallyakward
#1
Chapter 1: This is so sad
WARNING: DO NOT READ THIS WHILE LISTENING TO BREATH, MIRACLES IN DECEMBER AND YOU DONT KNOW LOVE UNLESS YOU LOVE HAVING WET RED EYES THEN BE MY GUEST :)
FayeYi #2
Chapter 1: You made me literally cried a bucket full of tears and I didn't stop for like 10 minutes. You're amazing authornim! And you really surprised me how a one shot can make me cry but most stories just make me go, 'WHY DID YOU DO THAT'. My eyes are really red and my face is drenched with tears.and what was worse is that I was listening to Peter Pan by EXO -M while listening to this. So it really made me cry harder.
PrettyHyoJin
#3
Chapter 1: .. grabe ang ganda .. I totally cried .. not just one drop .. you're so great autho-nim .. No other stories ever made me cry like that except Leave Us To Fate .. I Love It . Can I suggest it to my facebook friends?
louisebyun
#4
Chapter 1: AYAW KO NA. *FLIPS THE GALAXY*
Mochi_Cream_Smile
#5
OH.MAH.GAWD.AUTHORNIM. YOU HAVE JUST MADE ME CRY TONS AND TONS OF TEARS AND NOW MAH EYES ARE RED. T_T You wrote so well and I love this OneShot a lot. I cried even more since I was listening to Lyn's Back in Time (one of my favorite songs) great Job authronim~