Heterochromia iridum

Description

As you fly across the floor, you feel lighter with each step. The music suddenly stops.

"Enough."

You whirl around to face a man with droopy eyes and a slightly stern, concerned expression.

Foreword

Jaedelle's brainfart, version (?). Could be related to http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/493064/xoxo-my-valentine-oneshot-valentine-you-exo-kris-yifan 

But this time, you have a name. Your name is Jun Lihua, and you are a college student (20~24 years old) majoring in post-modern dance currently auditioning for a spot in a famous dance troupe. You have heterochromia and a slight heart condition. Lay is your classmate/upperclassman, Kris is your boyfriend. 

This is reader/OC X Lay/Kris. Alternate universe.

20140619 - extending into a longer story arc, HI is no longer a one shot.

 

I do not own the characters. Reader discretion advised; character death and mild language and material.

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MysticMoon #1
Chapter 9: Broke my heart...
rougenail #2
Chapter 9: I'll have to agree its sucha WTF ending! Lol! But had potential though. Could possibly had been some epic, tragic love story if you had taken time to flesh it out? Kinda abrupt? So whiplash effect. Dunno what to feel..

But nevertheless, thanks for writing & though the ending is .... Thanks for keeping us entertained thus far?^^
Notegirl99 #3
Chapter 9: What the heck?!? I feel so ... Emotionally betrayed. Yah! Authornim! Whats with the ending?! Huhuhu so sad. How could you?! Are you like, the author of game of thrones or something?!? Meh sorry for whining. I accept the ending as it is. Ok thanks bye. I wanna go cry in a corner. Bye.
rougenail #4
Btw why did they break up just right after making love? Was it that unsatisfactory? Haha *runs & hide!*
rougenail #5
Eh, why??!!! Why must they break up? Zing!
Notegirl99 #6
Chapter 7: Omg i love you so much! You are a very dependable author! You always update fast and all of the chapters are awesome! Thanks so much! Really appreciate it! Hoho lina n lihua are such awkwardly fast friends. Like woah theyre friendship escalated so fast but ain't complaining. Somehow i don't hate lina. Hahaha lina is actually very pleasant. I pity her for having Kris
rougenail #7
Chapter 6: Here for my Yixing. I like the way you've written Yixing here. Nice & cheeky. Fighting!

Btw Lihua & (fic) Yixing are in good company. Hotties like Mila Kunis & Henry Cavii have H.I. too!^^
Notegirl99 #8
Chapter 6: HOHOHO SO AWESOME THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! I LOVED IT HEHEHEH
tiabarty #9
I'm looking forward for your next update :D
Notegirl99 #10
Chapter 5: HOLLA~! New reader here~ loving everything so far huhuhu. So funny the forst chapter. I kept giggling when i was in the library reading this. Hahahah thanks for the update and may u find bliss in updating. Lol i sound like a priest. K bye
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