can you see me?

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can you see me?

jung jessica

xi luhan

oh sehun

 

 

           luhan sat on the bench wearing a black baby gap t-shirt, recovering his equilibrium.

           there was no way that was a ghost. in any way possible it was just a hallucination... he told himself. 

he was wrong.

a gust of cold wind clashed against his skin and there she was standing before him with a grin painted all over her face. 'you're kidding me.' luhan was startled by how she knew where he was.

'now, do you believe me?' she smirked and sat on the remotest seat from him just to not freak him out. 

waiting for luhan to reply was long; really long. he was contemplating wether to look at her or not at times and it resulted to glancing at her numerous times before he spoke, 'are you... dead?' luhan said in almost a whisper.

'seems like it.' she replied.

 

Foreword

polished version of can you see me on my old acc. i'll be contuing here :)

[credits; jessica and luhan icons are from exoshika

poster; tbn]

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piracha #1
Chapter 5: It's a good story please keep update.
withlovej
#2
Chapter 5: I think it's so sad that Jessica's dead, but it's great she got to hear how sincere her old friends are. Sooyoung and Jessica must have been good friends. Good thing Luhan improvised, people might have thought he was crazy talking to himself.

I wouldn't mind speaking to you lol.

Omg I like Kaisoo and Baeksoo (I actually love Baeksoo!) so I'll check out your other fic :)
soojungdict
#3
Chapter 5: I DO WANT TO TALK TO YOU, LOL.

Actually, your writing is great. It's not boring or effin exciting to the max that I would die - but it's simply great. Simple but nice.

I want you to continue but if you feel like it's a burden, then it's up to you :)
syjung
#4
Chapter 5: But I do ship hunsica kekeke
syjung
#5
Chapter 5: Yes I'm agree on heydoctor's opinion!;-)
withlovej
#6
Chapter 5: I'm going to be honest here, I am definitely not bored with you or your fic. Not many writers on here (no offense guys) write very well and neither do I but I love your writing. And this fic, I would love if you were to continue writing it. I don't care how long you take or how long I have to wait, I'll wait patiently.

Truthfully, I do not ship Hunsica much (I'm more of a Lusica fan haha) but your fic makes me rather fond of them. Like squeals they were so adorable in the first version of this fic. Your story is really great so please don't doubt yourself! :)
withlovej
#7
Chapter 3: Asdfghjkl I understand. I'm sure your readers, including myself, will be waiting for you patiently.
Un1c0rns
#8
Chapter 3: OH YAYA~
School ends in 2 weeks for me :3
syjung
#9
Chapter 2: omg omg I just can't wait for sica to meet sehun
Anyway this is goin to be hunsica or lusica?
Can you make a hunsica?:3
sara2002 #10
Chapter 1: im so happy you decided to continiue this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!