The Black Fear

Description

 
 
 
 
" Mckenna…
Lay…
The team…
Where  i am?
I whispered to myself." 
 
 
Hyllary Jenkins was forced to make an excursion by her best friend, Mckenna,
who was in love from some time with Lay, one of the guides of the event.
The complicated situation begins when the main character sensed that Lay cares for her.
Meanwhile the adventure goes on, Mckenna starts to feel so jealous about the relationship between the two,
at the point that one night decides to take far away from the group Hyllary with her, doing something bad to her.
When Hillary wakes up, she find herself alone in the forest,
until she decides to hide in a cave that was in the neighborhood.
But very soon she discovers that the situation is very dangerous.
Now she need to face her biggest phobies....

 

 

 

Will she find the Exit of the situation?

 

 

“The expression of his face was so amused, 
showed from his smirk and his evil eyes, 
so much to make me scared ..."(Chapter 2) 
 
 
 
 

Characters:

 

Main character of the fanfiction, a girl who doesn't know how to lie when she is in troubles.
She's scared of the nature, but in the same time it fascinated her.

 

 

Hyllary's Best friend,
hyperprotective and capable to become jealous of anyone who is next to Lay,
her unrequited love.

 

 

A doubleface person:
One side is gentle and considerated,
the other one is strong and determinate.
 
 
 
 
Other Character :
 
 
 
 
 

Foreword

First of all, i wanna THANK YOU reader for choose and read my FF in Asianfanficts :D
This isn't the first story i wrote, but it's the first english FF in Asianfanficts, because my native language is italian.
This story is translated by Juls and Maki, that i wanna thank soooo much,
because i'm not so good with the english translation.
You already read from the desciption, that the story is very particular,
infact it's focused in feelings and emotions hard to control when you face phobies.
I expect you'll like my beloved Fanfiction, also because is a translation,
so i'm hoping it's at the same level as the original in italian.
Please COMMENT and SUBSCRIBE :) :) :)
Obviously,i wanna know your opinions and suggestions about the translation and the storyline!
 
Last thing, but not meaningless, i wanna thank three girls that helps me in this Fanfiction:
Smomo= Grammar Mentor
Maki, my Unni= Sentences Mentor
Consu Maknae= the first who followed my italian Fanfiction :)
 
Thank You so Much

 

 

 

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shawol2408
#1
Wow..this story is so....(out of words)....I don't know what to say...
Keep up with the good work...
amalily #2
Chapter 1: I think you have done a great job with this story so far! I like how the characters each have their specific personality traits and how it influences the way they view the excursion. I can see you've thought a lot about this story! ^^ Good work and good luck in the future too!! ^^
iblackstar12
#3
Chapter 1: this looks good^^~ you did a good job writing this one...I know how it feels to write a story when you're not using your first language so...i salute you for the nice chap!~ i'll be waiting for your next chaps~ *subscribes*
PandaChux3
#4
Chapter 1: I think this story definitely has potential - so far, it seems pretty interesting to me :D. I know that English isn't your first language, but you've done well~! There's still some tenses/grammatical errors here and there (eg: you don't put a comma after a quotation mark), but practice makes perfect~! Try finding a reliable beta-tester/proof-reader just to make sure that everything flows well :3. Oh, and personally, I think it'll be easier to read if you don't position the texts in the center~ Again, good job! Good luck with the story! ^ ^
BlingBlingTiger
#5
I likenthe idea! It seems like it will be very interesting! It is different, so I think more people will be attracted to reading it :3 good luck with this!! I will be supporting this story!!
:3
Crazefan4eve
#6
I really like ur plot..it's so interesting~~~ hope u can update soon n keep up the good work :D
Cherry_Drops
#7
The plot sounds really unique, I'm liking this sort of dark vibe of the story
Can't wait to read your future chapters ^_^
T0T0mato
#8
As I promised I hopped by your fan fiction~
And I really like the plot of the story, it sounds so interesting! Keep it up~! ^____^