Ugly duckling

Description

My first fanfic ever guys!! So please be nice and be true to me, then I can do better next time!! >"< 

Foreword

  • Aom Sushar Manaying: come from a rich family, but unlike with the other rich girl, she's simple...well...."simple" maybe not the word, ugly duckling suites her more!! Why? She's short, she worn a thick glasses, a sparkling braces in in , her skin is tanned, and her body is kinda chubby, and her hair is likes a bird-nest... So sad but true, no matter how kind, smart and lovely she is, people still can't stand her, especially when she goes to an international school, where are full with rich jerks!!
  • Tina Suppanad Jittaleela: she's famous, handsome, charming and most important she is the ONLY heir of the most richest family in Thailand, simply like that and a tons of girls and boys are surounded her everyday!! But with a cold expression always on her face, no one dare to come near her.
tiaomyoner
let me knowcwhat you think about this chap guys!!One more chap to go and therevgo new story~~

Comments

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theolog #1
Chapter 4: great short story ... Actually it's my 5th times re-read it but i just remember to post a comment..

I really like this story :pp

Hope will there is other story from u about Tina & Aom :)))
lorensiaelisabet #2
Chapter 4: Love it ..love it
daleee #3
Chapter 4: Keep it up author...:-) i reallllyyyy liked ur story... next tym mka longer one... loved it... ;-)
Maria_Ulfa #4
Chapter 4: sweet story, :) thanks author
D_Moon_212
#5
Chapter 3: I enjoyed reading your story but how I wish it could've been longer but it's ok. You can always make another one, right? Hehe
I didn't have any clue that the two are already an item so the 3rd chap really made me a little confused but you answered it here so thank you haha
And also, this is my favorite line... "Oh!! For you information, too... That girl does crazy in bed HAHAHA" gosh tina, you're making me imagine wild and crazy thinGs LOL XD
kpop70 #6
Chapter 4: Make a. Second part pleasw
alikaptrbdr #7
Chapter 4: thanks a lot for the story.. still waiting another one :)
hayley123 #8
Chapter 4: Thank you author. Hope to more tiaom story from you
llivi10 #9
Chapter 4: Muy bien, espere algo un poco mas largo, espero leer mas historias suyas
tiaomyoner #10
i have said it before, this actualy a onecshot story but i don't have time so cant put it into one at a time so... and thanks for the support you guys!! i'm working on 2 or 3 more new stories anyway~ ;") hope still get ya support...