WinterWood

Description

A young promising fashion designer.

The major Label in the designer industry.

A boss's son.

One forebidden Love.

A tale of secerts and trials.

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phantomsluvr #1 Apr 18, 2014 23:41:23

Chapter 1: \0/ I LIKE IT!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

HaloNyte #2 Apr 18, 2014 23:01:59

thanks I have a notice of proofing coming soon since my computer's being wack and wont let me fix it at the moment. And yes yes it does. :)

GoldenPeace #3 Apr 18, 2014 22:59:37

Chapter 1: The idea is unique and sounds great, maybe work on some grammar mistake and adding capital letters? As for thoughts, instead of writing them out (ie: Dae's thoughts) try putting them into italics. Hope I helped and fighting!