Chapter 1: This was so well written. It was like an art piece, you just created a whole world with a single one shot and ended it with it. Just a glimpse, but a treasured one. Thank you for writing this! ♥
Chapter 1: It’s been a while that I left a comment on a fic, but this is just too great to miss. So here I am, telling you and thanking you for making this beautiful piece of art. Very detailed and nice flow of story. Everything felt natural and not forced. I can literally see the image of every sentences going alive in my mind, so thank you so much. My new favorite story and author. ♥️?
Chapter 1: this fic is really good. the way you narrated it makes me imagine how it will look like if is to be made into a movie or something like that.. thank you for this awesome story ..
"He observed whatever of Jinki's face he could see. He had only seen his eyes and the bridge of his nose and the golden strands that covered his forehead.
He started fantasizing what Jinki would actually look like without the cover. [...] And he was greeted by two crescents, the happiness the crescents portrayed even outshone the setting sun in brightness, this was the first time he had seen such an expression on Jinki; and he felt his heart flutter at such a display of emotion."
This whole fic makes me think of airport photos of Jinki, with his black face masks. And how it highlights his eyes and eye-smiles and makes them 10x cuter than normal.
Also, Jonghyun is a true MVP with all the fluttering and feels over the littlest things, all the way through this fic. Lol ^^
Chapter 1: OMG THIS ONESHOT IS SO AMAZING!!!
I really love the plot and how you wrote it!!!
And the ending asdaskjd how I hope this is a chaptered fic :')
But you're doing a really great job with this oneshot! Thumbs up!
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