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Welcome to

Good Review Shop!

Are you looking for a good review shop that will not only point out your weak points but will help you maximize your strengths?

Are you looking for a good review shop that doesn't mind cliche stories, but will dig deeper instead?

Are you looking for a good review shop that will go beyond saying that your story is 'good'?

Are you looking for a good review shop that will not mince with words, rather will give you an honest feedback?

Are you looking for a good review shop that is fast to update yet very detailed?

Are you looking for a good review shop that will read all of your chapters?

Are you looking for a good review shop that will help you proceed with your stories?

How I Run the Shop:

I am utilizing a non-graded review style. I do accept , yuri, and .I accept both complete and incomplete stories. I will feature reviewed stories that I find highly recommended.I will only review five stories per batch.

Rubrics

Title.

What is the first impression? Did it catch my attention? Did it reveal too much? Is it appropriate for the story? I am not the kind of reviewer who will ceaselessly attack the title if it is similar to other titles out there.

Description/Foreword.

Did they manage to make me want to click the next button and subscribe?

Poster/Presentation/Appearance.

Did they manage to give the appropriate feel for the story? I will include the graphics, layouts, tags, typescript, author notes, paragraph breaks, transition, etc.

Writing Style/Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary.

Does the story need proofreading?

What are the common grammatical errors found in the story?

Is your style effective in delivering the story?

Pacing.

Is it too fast or too slow?

What made it too fast? What made it too slow?

If it has the right pace, what contribute to it?

Plot.

Is it original or cliché?

If somewhat cliché, did the authornim manage to add twists to the story making it original?

Sometimes, I get irritated when other reviewers deduct originality points if there are some common scenarios in the story. Hello. We all have common denominator. No one is living in a unique setting with a unique plot and unique character traits. More or less, we have similarities. Just because it is set in school and there's a bully doesn't mean that it's unoriginal. Sometimes when I encounter reviewers who constantly do this, I tend to visit their stories. Really.

Characterization.

Are the characters well-developed? Or do they need further improvement?

Are they flat or well-rounded?

Personal Enjoyment.

From a reader's point of view,

how much did I enjoy the story?

Rules

1. Subscribe. Feel free to unsubscribe later if you already received your review.

2. Upvote if you are satisfied with your review.

3. Request from other shops. You are allowed to do so. I highly recommend the shop's amazing affiliates below.

4. Comment after you read the review. Comment your thoughts about the review. Your nationality is the drowssap.

5. Credit properly by linking username and the shop.

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Foreword

Request List

Batch 5

1. Nictaeny9 - Dark Ties

2. ~~Miawitch_1002 - Just the way you are~~

3. ~~JangRINA - Slightly Envious~~

4. ~~RedGuitarist - Being Afflicted~~

5. ~~LilTibbers - Thrown Aside~~

Batch 6

1. heart_and_seoul - After Earth

2. pandoralacey - My Name is Her

3. yuusama - BAEKHYUN, DAEHYUN & TAEHYUNG

4. Miro-chan - ALYNM,

5. myunghyun4ever - Runes of Despair

Batch 7

1. momijiyong - Stare

2. ~~Northmelon - Candor Academy~~

3. EPIONE - Hello, Counsellor

4. TheFourLeafClover - Let me Read your Mind

5. Pocpocpockii - Coffee

Batch 8

1. EXO4ever26 - Will You Answer?

2. bts_kimtaehyung - Blind Heirs

3. Crysjun - Yearning to Fall

4. capricciofarce - Liberamente

5. chubbyfaceDIVA - Leaning on The Edge

Advertisement:

1.theEXO | in progress

2. allmylove | in progress

3. pandoralacey | in progress

The Affiliates

poster and background credits to: Infiniteyandbeyond|simplygraphics

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haeimecah #1 Dec 17, 2014 02:12:04

Chapter 20: Hey~ Do you remember me? I'm the write who wrote 'Am I Hurting?', the story you review in Batch 3. I just want some help. A small one. In the review, you said my characterization for Hyukjae was unrealistic. I've edited the chapter for that scene (Chapter 2) and I want to know is it better than before. Is it enough hesitations from his character or do you think it is still unrealistic. I know this is out of the blue, but I don't know who better than you to assess me. If you are not to busy, of course. If you have lots to do, than it is really fine :)

allmylove #2 Aug 9, 2014 05:07:45

Hi. mj_DTD starting a shops list and he want to add your shop :
Can you pls complete this form and put it in the comments box for this link?

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Services/Packs/posters/trailers exp:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/802501/dream-city-shops-list-graphic-poster-trailer-advertise-shop-layouts-reviewer

pandoralacey #3 Jul 24, 2014 16:34:03

Chapter 1: Author : pandoralacey

Profile Link/s: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/748637

Story Title: Trapped

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/780858/trapped-eunjung-friendship-horror-hyuna-mystery-supernatural-kai

Poster Link (if any): http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd205/teenace07/er.png

Type (One shot or Chaptered): One shot

Status (Complete or Ongoing): Complete

Characters: Hyuna, Eunjung, EXO

Genre: Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance

Rated (if yes, please specify e.g. character death, self-harm, ual content): Rated M for alleged

Summary: Only that day (2013, September) did I learnt the pungent smell blood, varieties of human flesh, and the morbid of death; it was the turning point in my life, also the beginning of everything – when the bus we rode skidded into a ravine. When I was on the verge of surrendering to the tragic fate, she reached for my hand and told me, "We'll survive this together."

Forty-four people were killed in the country's deadliest road accident; There were only six survivors and I was one of them.

Short synopsis: A heart-whole friendship developed between two strangers (Song Hyuna, Cha Eunjung) that met and survive in a tragic accident. In no time at all, they were inseparable, but when Song Hyuna found herself enamoured with Eunjung's former boyfriend (Kai), her best friend went missing and it got to the point where she dread going to bed.

Message to readers: Greetings earthlings, first and foremost thank you for reading this. If you're interested with my story, please kindly check it out and leave some comments while you're at it. I'll be anticipating you.

Anything else?

Package: Special Packages # 3

cherrybloss21 #4 Jul 18, 2014 20:48:54

Chapter 2: username: cherrybloss21

position (graphic designer/beta reader): graphic designer

portfolio (graphic designer only): http://inspirit201.imgur.com/all/

HANHYERICE #5 Jul 17, 2014 07:29:12

hi, would you like to be affiliates? ♡
〈 http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/749577/ 〉

pinkad #6 Jul 14, 2014 10:53:31

Mind to be affies? \^o^/

Mystical Light advertisement shop

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/784003/

NorthMelon #7 Jul 10, 2014 21:35:46

I want to apply ^^

username: northmelon

position (graphic designer/beta reader): graphic designer

portfolio (graphic designer only): http://imgur.com/a/5kNmV

story links (beta reader only): N/A

Glamgirls #8 Jul 8, 2014 12:31:11

Chapter 21: Well- the problem is my english isn't really good, and I don't know how to tell what's on my mind. It always be short..