LACRIMOSA

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1 Girl, 9 Guardians. 1 Destination, Endless Obstacles.

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1 girl, 9 guardians. 1 destination, endless obstacles.

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This is a fanfiction I originally started back in 2011. Later on I was unable to regularly update it. As such, finally with more spare time on hand, I'm giving it a fresh start. Chapters 1 to 11 are already complete however I will be posting them one by one in order to take the chance to re-review them all once again. If you're an original reader of this story, you don't have to read it again from the beginning as I did not make any crucial changes to storyline. Simply details here and there and grammer.

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milkinthebox_ #1
Chapter 14: I was looking at fics from ssf and reading them when i encountered this story. It seems oddly familiar but i never gave it a thought until i came back here to reread sunbyung stuff 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Anyway, chapter 13 is indeed long but oh man... the scenes were vividly painted on my mind. It was like, i was there with them and the emotions especially Hyomin’s very human emotions... the way it was written’s greatly appreciated. I love how you tackle Hyomin’s really. It’s really tempting to just give Hyomin a power well above the mages but she’s got no idea of on the first few chapters then go to the adventure where hyomin instantly knowing how to wield it but you didn’t. You give the story and the characters time to discover while dealing with what’s currently happening.

It’s been years and idk if an update will come but for sure, i’ll be rereading this fic once in a while.
mellifluouswan 1689 streak #2
Re-reading this story once again, and i can't help but to miss this. Huhuhuhu I wonder when will you update is again? ㅠㅠ
mellifluouswan 1689 streak #3
Chapter 1: I'm still waiting for your update author-ssi :<
AngieHyomin #4
no more update? :(
GG_sone_sz #5
Chapter 14: just found this story and it's totally daebak..

update soon author-sshi..
Jimayy #6
Chapter 14: What a long chapter (chap 13). The forest is a dark and mysterious place. we all assumed danger would followed.
loved how you're painting a picture of events, a chapter this intense with action, it'd be easy to just 'tell it', you gave more of a picture and blended dialogue to make it less like a straight-up "this happened, so and so"

Hyomin favors Tiffany like crazy... and the forest is dangerous as hell. The smoke tentacle, sounds similar to evil fog in "Lost", or something creepy from a ! lol jk jk jk. We were introduced to the soshi members before in the story. 13 chapters in, and character development is still making steps. Hyomin was the first character established, but what we learned about her hasn't (or doesn't) relate to her mission or important yet. Hyoyeon comes off as daring. Jessica comes of very nonchalant. i enjoyed it. please give us more.

"Don't go chasing waterfalls..."
aliciatongtong #7
Chapter 14: Super duper excited for he next update author-nim! ^^
lovesuggestion #8
Chapter 14: Omg... with every new chapter your story becomes more amazing.
I feel bad for Hyomin being so defenseless... I like it because she can have Sunny protecting her but maybe they can also teach her a bit of magic so she can defense herself in case something like the wolf happens again while being alone (I know, I know, Sunny promised not to leave her alone never again but... who knows..? Maybe it'll happen again...). Or maybe she has some "key powers"...
Can't wait for the next chapter~
water_rid #9
Chapter 14: Please be safe my girls though this is quite dangerous I wish you will be alright.
Author please let's Hyomin have some talents to fight against those monsters.
Thanks for update author ssi...the attack scene is really amazing.
mellifluouswan 1689 streak #10
Chapter 14: uwaaaaah~ finally an updateee~ author-ssi~ im really curious omona what will happen to the girls next? aigooo~ author-ssi~ im really curious. please update soon~ fighting ^^
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