The Number I Know

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After a few nights of "online" slumber party at Facebook, my frienemy and I have decided to write this. This is our first time writing (and we're just testing the waters out, technically checking the pairing compatibilty, so we paired Sooyoung with a guy who is Kim Nam Gil instead of a Soshi member or f(x) member) please bear with us.

This one shot is inspired by the song below:


JUNG JOON YOUNG – MISSED CALL (아는 번호)

Do you even see me?
Me, in pain from seeing your tears?
Do you even hear me?
My words that I’m carefully saying?

How are you today?
I start with those words again
I thought you would remember
That I am always in the same place, by your side

 

Trivia:

For inspiration purposes my co-author and I played it like a million times while imagining the scenes, writing the plot, draft, and final draft. Hahaha!

 

P.S.: Enjoy! :) Comments are highly appreciated.

 

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rizanuzula #1
Chapter 1: "Can't you see I'm in pain from seeing your tears?" OMG nam gil so gentle.....
I cant imagine if soo hurt herself n die.....but she save actually ^^
Good job zen n friend......keep writing ok!!!! ^^ fighting
rizanuzula #2
Nice song author siii ^^………… hello new reader here #bow
XxLordxX #3
Chapter 1: Well, here goes my novel sized review again hahaha! First it was a nice work, quite short, but still great. I'll tell what I already said on another review of mine to you, the story could be longer. The time passed too fast, there wasn't a clear past. Also, what happened to her girlfriend? I think I have an idea, but it could be wrong...

If, my idea is right, Sooyoung is in that spirits because she broke up with him... If that really happened, then why not detailing the fight for example? Keeping it "secret" leaves a lot of possibilities, also, the author writing how things happened give a different feel. A friend of mine expected some things on my fanfiction, some were right, and when he read what happened his reaction was amazing, even though he already knew. A reader likes to know he/she is right and also loves to see things he/she didn't imagine before ;).

Now, about the end, it felt powerful, it felt deep. I loved it. "Can't you see I'm in pain from seeing your tears?" - it is a powerful, yet sad sentence to end your story. You wouldn't find something better there IMO. Just like one of my favorite oneshots that had a very tragic ending and the last sentence held much feels, it wasn't part of the story like your, but a retype of part of the last words from a character.

I like to review some pieces comparing to my favorites. In the tragedy genre, it always feels great to end without really ending, my favorite oneshot (the one from above), had its story finished without a real conclusion, and you did the same here! It's an amazing way of doing it. Because it give the feels and make the reader THINK! He/she will keep wondering what will happen in the future, will have some ideas, it'd be pretty funny if someone actually did a fanfiction of a fanfiction someday hahaha!

Well, in the end it's about that. Congratulations for this amazing work! I really liked the perspective shift, made it very pleasant to read! Keep up the good job.

~Lord
Flying-unicorns #4
Chapter 1: Story*

...whoops...finger slipped?

But but like..yeahh..HWAITING!

-awkwardly slithers away-
Flying-unicorns #5
Chapter 1: Am I weird for thinking you guys are cute since you said 'slumber party' Haha cute

Anyways, that was a hmmm somewhat angsty sorry, but nonetheless great :3

You both did a great job :D

You should both continue writing :3

HWAITING!!
naneulsaranghae #6
Chapter 1: this is nice, albeit angsty. :)
thankgod the guy arrived before sooyoung could harm herself.
why'd she break up with her boyfriend tho?

anyways. goodjob authors~
hwaiting :3
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