White Promise

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Chanyeol is the elder brother of Hayi, the sweet fun loving incarnation of a modern day princess. She is the most beautiful and Chanyeol is very protective and loves her just like any brother would, but when their parents begin to stop loving the childern their sibling bond is put through tension. They begin to argue and one day....

 

         Hayi runs away~

"Chanyeol collapsed to the ground, after hours of searching for his sister, there she was standing with a crown of pale  roses atop her head, snow at her bare feet and a beautiful smile.

I love you brother' she whispered and placed her hand on his cheek"

 

Foreword

well this is just a story i wrote for my latest english assignment

it's based modern version of a Filipino myth called The Crow and The Hen (why chickens scratch the ground) 

^ here is the link to the original story.

 

So my original complete english assignment i finished yesterday has the characters 

Joshua & Anntoinette 

but i changed the characters becuase i think these two would suit this story better.

 

sorry it's so short, usualy my one shots go for at least 6,000-8,000 words but my assignment had to be 700-1200 words max. 

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Liana_DS #1
Chapter 1: i don't think this girl can act cute like this... she always looks so stoic, especially in 'Rose'.
but she is cute, actually, i just realize, and amazingly beautiful ^^
and this fic is also beautiful.
but there are some mistakes, like this part, when you wrote 'Josh' instead of 'Chanyeol' in a sentence.
also, you wrote: 'He blood temperature dropped low', you should wrote 'his'.
just some minor mistakes.
like this ^^ but hope you'll write a longer version XD
yeulisoo #2
Chapter 1: aahh so hayi was 6yo? i thought he was a teenager! xD feels touched~
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