"A Contest Entry" White Picket Fence

Description

An entry for http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/59403/once-upon-a-time-aff-writing-contest-contest-fun-kpop-random ......I hope I haven't completely missed the point of the contest, but this was my version of a skewed fairy tale that was inspired from prompt number 8. 

Title: White Picket Fence
Characters: Jinki, Minjung, Woosun (main players)
Word count: 2,195 (So short! But I'm in love with oneshots v.v)
Disclaimer: I do not own Lee Jinki, but the rest of the characters and the storyline itself are all completely mine. Please be kind~
Other: I.......am very fond of the Onew I made in this story. I don't want to write details here, because I hate giving away the story, but this Jinki is one of my favorite characters I've ever made. 

Foreword

Prompt Eight:: 『The Land of Faery, Where nobody gets old and godly and grave. Where nobody gets old and crafty and wise. Where nobody gets old and bitter of tongue』William Butler-Yeats (The Land of Heart's Desire)

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stellarstarlight
#1
Chapter 1: i think it beautiful and interest <3
kissmepls
#2
Wonderful! I love this. c:
ilabya7 #3
interesting~
Mahwiii
#4
Chapter 1: I feel like hugging jinki woosun and u authornim ;-; this made me teary >.<
taeminKNIGHT
#5
Chapter 1: I'm sorry, I feel kind of stupid for saying this but I don't get it... I think I almost do. but when I think about it I lose it. Can it be explained to me?
Lady_Skinship
#6
Ah~! It played out perfectly. ^^ Like I had an idea and you got it. I love Jinki. I love how patient, happy and caring he is. You can really tell his love for his wife in this fic. It's beautiful. The flow of the story even though you can tell the pain and stress that her condition brings it still makes you feel warm inside cause he loves her and nothing else matter. And I don't even read straight fics. ^_^ Me gusta~ I love this and you. <3
latoshan #7
T~T Thank you for reading! I'm sorry if it came off as confusing when it came to her...sometimes it's hard to put what's in my head into words, lol. I'm glad you liked it though, and again, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!
forgetfulxangel
#8
Wow....I have to say that this one-shot was really really interesting. Your forward and the plot prompt had me wondering what this was going to be about. I really like this...because...I like weird skewed fairytales, it just made this...really interesting. Haha, sorry, at a loss for words. At first when I read it I thought it was a little girl because of how she acted, but then I revisited the forward and it clicked. <br />
Loved it <3