Dont leave me !!!

Description

  I'll let him go even now i'm carring his child. He deserved to have a better life with a wonderful WOMAN not a GUY like me .



         I think i love him now. I want him every night . I wanna hug that tiny body and enjoy his sweet scent, touch his milky skin and kiss his lips.



         "I dont love u this is just an engagement,Mr. Lee "



         "Pls comeback i need u , my belove "

Foreword

Lee Byunghun - 21 years old

     He is a second son of a wealthy and powerful family - Lee group
     He is the coldest guy in this world due to the accident in the past (that accident will appeared in the story later ^^)
     He has alot of girlfriend or exactly they are all his toys coz he always feel lonely at night and cant sleep without other ppl beside him. He will make his body tired then fall into sleep after that (you guys know what i mean right?? kekeke)
      Nobody cant be friend with Byunghun ssi~ except Daniel and Jonghyun . His childhood friends and also his coursins. They are all sons of a wealthy families .

 


Lee Chanhee - 21 years old


     He is a cheerful son of a wealthy family but after his parents pass aways during the business trip 5 years ago when he was 16 , everything was changed . He need to look after his little bro,Changhyun

He has nightmate everynight and always wake up with puffy eyes and sweat all over his body (Poor my Chanhee *cry*)

    He need to give up on his study to work as much as he can to have enough money for all their needs and money for his bro's school fee.
    Chanhee has a Hyung next door  who help him alot since his parents pass away, Bang Minsoo - a kind and quite guy








Annyeonghasaeyo~ this is my first fanfic so i'll try my best to give u a good fanfic. And pls subscribe and comments to let me know what u want for each chapter ^^

Thanks for reading untill now and sorry for all my grammar mistake and spelling . English is not my first language ^^


Hope u guys will like it ^^I worked really hard on it and everything is just my image so if u wanna re-upload it please ask me first. Thank you so much *bow* 

POSTER CREDIT BY '심장 수술' poster shop 

 

Comments

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Rinininette #1
I think it's a good fic with a potencial but like you said it at each chapter, English is not your first language and you make many grammar and spelling mistakes ^^' so it's disturbing. And then you write in SMS language so... English is really the main problem, and I know you can improve it like I did :)
Beside that, the story plot is great and there are lots of drama, so we don't really have boring and short passages. Your chapters are long enough, it's a good point. Maybe you should have developed a little more about the life problems about ChangRick, but this is okay, because we have already the beginning of their love life and some parts of Changhyun's pregnancy ^^
So good job for your fic and hope you'll improve!
hanneulbyungchan
#2
Chapter 36: I waited for this last chapter...for so long...love it such a wonderful ending!!!! ^__^
yumisawanga
#3
Chapter 36: aaawwwww this was just so amazing thank you for writing it!!!!!! XD
Songjiin #4
Chapter 36: Don't shift to chuniel.. I do like them but just as brothers relation.. Not like chunjoe that's have special relation(love)
auliya_angel #5
Chapter 36: this story is amazing..
please make a sequel or make a new chunjoe fanfic...
hanneulbyungchan
#6
Chapter 35: wahaah!!!I read your story for two days...please update soon!!!!
hanneulbyungchan
#7
Chapter 8: waaah!!! really love your story...we almost have same mind i think..in terms of writing stories...^__^...love it!!!

I hope Chanhee is a girl!!!!,,,,yet I imagined he is....
Songjiin #8
Chapter 34: update soonnn.... im anticipating the end of the story....its a great story ever..
Galaxy_30 #9
Chapter 34: Gah~Update I want Chunjoe back together. I want Channie to get pregnant again. Who knows he might have 2 boys and a girl~~~. XD Great story btw!
dysch05 #10
Chapter 33: waaa this story will be end..I hope happy ending ^^ it's good story author-nim. I liked it. update soon please..^^