Broken

Description

As he now stared at the other, it was difficult to picture him doing something so terrible and violent.

Foreword

Originally posted on LiveJournal for a Dark Bingo challenge (here). A couple of years ago this idea suddenly popped into my head, but with different characters, of course. It'd come back every so often until I now decided to make it into a fic in hopes that it will finally leave me alone. >.> Not a happy story, I warn you now. It includes death (murder, more like, though no details) and is basically just angst. It's also an AU.

 

It is finished, so I'll post it soon. :) And it's short; sorry about that. XD

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WakaWakaCrazy #1
Chapter 1: i dont get what just happened. so his dad came n what? what happened to himchan afterwards? the whole story n writing was great but it was left hanging. it ended too suddenly.i think it would be better if there was another chapter to continue this :)
MollsLeMouse #2
Chapter 1: Oh my god, this story is perfect! I mean, all I wanted was to keep reading and reading, but the end came :( And, oh, really amazing!
CindfrogBlue #3
Chapter 1: This is....- AGJBGDBK DKNGDDHFRBOFSRFGWQIPKNBZZGT!!!!! OMG ;A;
Changsubshii #4
I like your writing a lot! Keep It up ^^
detectiveconan #5
Chapter 1: JSAHKJDAHLDJSFHSLKJAFHGLSKAGHLSKAHGLKSHSLGDJKHSAGJLKHNVSRA;GNLDSKJNASG I SKJFHKJSFLJKSDHNGJSLKAGHNDJSLKAGSAN NFIDUSKLFNGJDS;AFGKIS;LSADGBUREOISLNGA!!!!!!!!
TrinTrin #6
Chapter 1: D: Again, I don't know whether I hate you or love you. I mean that story though. And you're such a good writer and I juST ARGHH IT WAS GREAT OKAY
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