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Description

In a society that shuns all those people who have special powers, Chanyeol always just wanted a life as average as possible.

But when he keeps making mistakes, he begins to wonder whether his future path can possibly be 'average'.


Foreword

This is the rewritten and simplified version of ESCAPE. It will not include the subplots around everyone who ends up in the Games but only the slave ship bit.

There's no need to read ESCAPE though, because I will explain everything from scratch and the timeline will change.



 

WARNINGS (just to make sure that you know what you're getting yourself into c:)

  1. includes violence and questionable moral standards (nothing serious enough to be rated M but still there)
  2. you might be disappointed if you're looking for

 

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EmptyTinkerbell
#1
Chapter 12: This should be a fan fiction of the 2017 year. I'm serious. This story is so great, I'm speechless. There were some things I was confused about, but I understood the story quite well (uh, I hope I did lol). Your writing and creativity are so good! It's... wow. Sorry, I'm still overwhelmed with this story. But heads down to you.
EmptyTinkerbell
#2
Chapter 11: OH MY GOD. THE PLOT TWIST ADFSJDBKSDSD. IT BLOWN MY MIND. THIS IS SERIOUSLY GOLD.
I-I am speechless. It's just... The best plot twist ever! EVER!!!
Sorry, I'm just... WOAH :O
EmptyTinkerbell
#3
Chapter 10: Heck, I didn't consider something like that happening at all! Woah. Kris really has it tough, poor him...
EmptyTinkerbell
#4
Chapter 9: Oh my. Xiumin hurt Chanyeol and I'm not sure if it was unconsciously... They were so close! If Chanyeol didn't want it, he would not start it, right? Now, Chanyeol is hurting :<
EmptyTinkerbell
#5
Chapter 8: Woah, Tao is so observant and smart! To be honest, I didn't expect it from him. His interaction with Chanyeol made me think that he's quite reckless, or maybe should I say... rude. I never take into consideration that there's more to him than that rude facade. Shame on me!
EmptyTinkerbell
#6
Chapter 7: Is there a person in this story who had a happy childhood? In that world it's probably hard to have... The world there is so cruel... I wish I could go there, take the boys, and bring them here ;_;
EmptyTinkerbell
#7
Chapter 6: Oh my God, Tao XDDD I don't know how it was possible, but when I read that he startled Kris and Lay, I was startled as well O.O Magic~~ hahaha
Shiet, I hope that Lu or Xiumin aren't sick! I'm so curious what they're talking about, hmm...
EmptyTinkerbell
#8
Chapter 5: Oh . What the hell happened to Chanyeol... again? What's with him being in the weird trance? Xiumin almost died! I'm just glad that it didn't end much worse than that...
EmptyTinkerbell
#9
Chapter 4: It's so good that Yeol has Xiumin, he would be very lonely without him... And the scene with Chanyeol heating Xiumin's tea? So cute! I hope there will be more things like that between the two of them :3 Aw!
EmptyTinkerbell
#10
Chapter 3: Flying can be useful at times too! Kris should appreciate himself more >u< And wow, he has quite an interesting crew. I just hope that he won't sell Chanyeol or something D: