Chapter 1: omg omg omg this is amazing like soo sad yet somehow beautiful and a bit creepy i love it though i really would love to know what happened that night well anyway authornim thank you for writing such a good story

Chapter 1: oh my dear god, i'm crying. This is so angsty :(
i love it ! ngehehe

my feelings <3 i enjoyed this!

Chapter 1: No.. No, why author nim ? Huhuhu..

this story is so depressing but so beautiful. I never ship jongtae but i guess i will from now on. uhm how did jinki "killed" taemin anyway?

Chapter 1: I am curious yeah!! Lol

Anyway tbis was very heavy in terms of idea. The flow was okay for me.. fragmented scenes didn't really bother me

Though i am judt a tad bit curious of the backstory.

Aside from that i am pleased with this one ^^

Chapter 1: That's...heavy. Well uhm... The idea is great. The pace matches perfectly too and you chose just the right words to touch the reader, me at least. Maybe read over it again for grammar.
Great work though. Urgh, i'm still down bc perfect Jinki killed himself. q.q