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Description

The moment Zhang Yixing lays eyes on Boyun, he knows she's the one.

But the thing is... Boyun is eighty-four years old.

 

Foreword

"But age is nothing but a number right? I mean I never expected to fall for a noona either, but you can’t control love. She’s the first person I’ve ever been attracted to, and I know she’ll be the last. Everything feels right when I’m with her. I hear birds singing when she smiles at me. And it feels like the sun follows her every move, and royally showers her with its warm rays. I sound sappy as hell but I don’t even care at this point. She’s the one for me. I don’t care if she’s friggin’ eighty-four years old. There. I said it. What are you going to do about it?"

 


 

 

Nominated for the World of Literature FanFiction Awards, under the category Best in Comedy FanFiction of the Year in 2014!

A huge thank you to the lovely tessadahl for nominating me~ ^^

 


 

 

Featured on CapriquariusMei's wonderful blog, make sure to have a look!

Thank you so much 

 


 

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Comments

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AlaskaE #1
Chapter 1: Wow just wow
JenLee
#2
Chapter 1: What just happened?! O.o
I don't think any other fic has ever caught me unawares this way.
Whew.
lockedoutofheaven96
#3
Chapter 1: ........
I cannot believe what I've just read. Why didn't you tell me about this before?
OMFG ITS BRILLIANT COMEDY SUITS YOU BEAUTIFULLY
GOD LAY WHY?!?
yellowlight_4
#4
Chapter 1: My reaction: O.o
id3ntical341 #5
Chapter 1: ...wow. That escalated quickly. HAHAHA. I'm speechless. Still gathering my thoughts after that. But I had a feeling that Boyun was Baekhyun's grandma once it was revealed that she lived in the mountains.
CapriquariusMei
#6
Hi hi~ this is just a courtesy notice that I have written a blog post about this story. ^^ You may check it out at https://capriquariusmei.wordpress.com/2015/02/10/fanfic-recommendations-february-2015/
kiyahfiyah #7
THIS IS SO TOUCHING I NEARLY CRY BLOOD
CapriquariusMei
#8
Chapter 1: This is absolutely surprising and funny!! Love it. Though, just a couple thoughts after I read this story:

1) I saw a news a while back that a twenty-something years old did fell in love with an old granny (she's around at least 75 or 80 if I remember). And interestingly enough, due to fear of backslash from society, they live on top of a mountain. So, this kind of things do happen in reality. Actually, I'm glad reality ends on a much nicer note than your story's ending here. Though, this story is absolutely a joy!

2) If you ever find the time, please do consider editing the story, because I notice some typos & some grammar errors here & there. This story would be absolutely perfect if it's error-free. =D
chanowh
#9
Chapter 1: Crying so hard. This is beautiful
MidnightAzure
#10
Chapter 1: wait. wat.
i cannot even.
it's, it's beautiful.