Chapter 1: Aw. This was adorable. lol I loved the idea and how everything played out in the scheme of things. Again, very believable and utterly sweet.
There were a couple lines in the beginning/middle that were confusing in terms of speaker:
“Don’t be such a baby.” Eli rolled his eyes, tossing his shirt to the side.
“Sorry I will knock next time.” The younger smiled and motioned for the vocalist to come in.
I think Soohyun is supposed to be saying both those lines but the spacing makes it sound like it's supposed to be back and forth banter with Eli still. :/ And it felt a bit like you were skimming over certain parts with the time jumps (which might could have been expanded on just a little bit) but it's not a terrible thing. ;) hehe
On to the good stuff! I really did enjoy it. The emotions and the slow reveal of how Eli feels is cute. His cheesy self. :3 That was adorable indeed. I liked the way that you made Soohyun take the initial reaction as rejection and how they both recovered. heh Nicely done.
The lessons were very briefly described, which is where I would have loved to see more interaction, but in terms of progression, it definitely moved the story along. Kevin's interference/intervention was hilarious and that bit at the end was brilliant! I was grinning like a fool the way Soohyun kept saying the phrases, only changing that one very important word, and totally messing with Eli's head. XD *flails* Never trust AJ and Kevin. rofl I cracked up. That was a really good ending and I was quite pleased with it. haha
Chapter 1: It's a very cute one shot the idea with the english teacher matches well to UKkiss.
It makes you automatically swoon while reading <3
I also liked the end, how Soohyung confessed so bravely ^^
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