Lovely Master

Description

Lee Sungjong accepted an offer.. to be Kim Myungsoo's slave to help pay off his parents debt; a loan from Myungsoo’s parents. He must bear with all of Myungsoo’s orders and stupid habits if he wants to keep his brother Sungyeol safe from Myungsoo.

Lee Sungjong : A student of ‘Daekyung University’. He’s an orphan, his parents passed away in a car acceident when he was 9 years old. He’s living with his big brother; Lee Sungyeol.

Kim Myungsoo : Kim Property’s current CEO. An adorable man who is very intelligent. He's very stubborn and always has a smug expression gracing his features. Enjoying his perfect life.

Lee Sungyeol : Lee Sungjong’s big brother. A nice guy who loves his brother wholeheartedly.

 

Foreword

First story in English. (O///////O)
I’m feeling uneasy when post this story since my English is not good. (I’ve 6 grades in my school for English lesson khukhukhu)
Then if my words is so confussing you all, tell me properly, so I can learn English more hard starting off now.
Jja, enjoy my worst story then. Thanks

 

minchan_lemoncandy
Hi guys, sorry for so so so slow to update, our shin hye got a problem with her laptop, so she couldn't edit the story. we're promise will update soon...

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Diep_Van #1
Chapter 21: I really like your fic ^^ May I translate it to Vietnamese?
Oh_My_Stars
#2
O_o
I have no idea why I said Yesung at the end. I meant Myungsoo.
Oh_My_Stars
#3
Chapter 21: It depends on how many more chapters you want till the end. If you want to add many more chapter 5 or more, then I would go aline the same line as andaeriel suggested . That Myungsoo lets Sungjong go, but with a promise to stay in touch(which they do). However, Sungyeol notices the big change in Sungjong's emotion. Rather than being his carefree happy self, he is sad and gloomy all the time. Then, let's say...Sungyeol wakes up hearing Sungjong crying in his sleep, he discovers he is still asleep and stars talking in his sleep. After hearing what he says...he has a heart to heart talk with him the next day and Sungyeol is visibly upset over it.. Without Sungjong's knowledge, he has Myungsoo come to America to discuss this new information. Then, perhaps in the end, Sungjong comes home(from where ever) and he sees his bags are packed. He's worried that he's upset Sungyeol, but turns out to be a surprise and he's going back to Korea with Yesung.
O_O
I only meant to write a couple of sentences.
sungjong-juseyo
#4
Chapter 21: I THINK THEY SHOULD HAVE A DRAMATIC SCENE WHERE MYUNGJONG TAKES SUNGJONG AWAY AND ADMITS THAT THEYRE DATING
andaeriel #5
Chapter 20: i guess it can go as both directions:
1. myungsoo letting him go, and sungjong is going to america but in a depressed states. sungyeol realised that sungjong hasn't be smiling and looks gloomy and have a heart to heart talk then he realised that his bro is in love with his best friend. confirm it with myungsoo, and makes a surprise for sungjong by asking myungsoo to come to america to take him back.

2. myungjong break it down to sungyeol that they're in love with each others and are dating now and don't want to be separated, so in the end the one who come to america is only sungyeol while he knows that he can left sungjong for myungsoo bcs he has no doubt that the latter will take a good care of his brother and make him happy.

i hope this help
sungjong-juseyo
#6
Chapter 20: Please continue this forever author-nim! I love this story so much and no no no I want jongie to stay with Myungsoo jebal ;~; they're so cute and ah I just love this so much <3
sungjong-juseyo
#7
Chapter 2: Yes yes yes this is great so far
AdrianaInspirit
#8
Chapter 20: Friend!! Thanks for the update <3 Have a Lemon Candy >O<
Yeol don't be angry!!!!
AdrianaInspirit
#9
Chapter 19: Yisus...NO!!!! Sungjongie please say no!!
U have to stay with Soo T.T
Thank u very much!!! U finally updated!!!
Myungeunsoo
#10
Chapter 19: Ohmy their y time so perfect huwaaa I like it so much but at the end hmmmp it means jongie have to be seperate with myungsoo? Aaaa I dont want it hmmmp :(