Chapter 4: I'm just reading this^^. Well, allow me to correct some things for you^^
If you put dot(.), please put space before you start another words.
Example : Kyuhyun hate Sungmin. But Sungmin love him.
Instead,
Kyuhyun hate Sungmin.but Sungmin love him.
And i also want to ask. You wrote in the part 4:
''Is that your final conclusion? If yes.I no We will make your life living hell..."
Isn't that "if yes. I am not." instead of "if yes.I no"?
Well maybe that just typos. But I hope you receive all of my opinions about this :D
Anyway this kind of idea already so many but I really loved yours. Beside of all the typos, you wrote really well because honestly, I can't even wrote anything kkkk~~
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