Chapter 1: I'm really enjoying this.
Like the other readers have mentioned, the way it's written is lovely.
Everything flows together so smoothly. It almost feels delicate.
I only upvote stories if I really feel like they deserve it. This story is still progressing, but I really enjoy it. It's something about how it's worded, just... lovely, kind of. Needless to say I really enjoy your writing style, and can't wait for more!~
Chapter 1: Ooo this was really interesting. I really like the way you wrote it. It had such a softness to it? That is the only way I can think to describe it. I don't think I described it very well though.
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