Diamonds Fall From The Sky

Description

A little girl, aged about six, runs along the dimly lit street, her tiny arms desperately holding on to the freshly baked bread, her breath coming out in puffs. A few stray cats meow from the dumpster cans but she doesn't pay any attention to them; she’d feed them later. Along the way she nearly slips and falls on some wet slippery dirt cloth adorning the dull, dirty and cracked road. The air is thick with the slight stench of the nearby sewer, surprisingly though, this night it is less than usual.

 

“Aunty Jung!” The girl cries, as she comes to a stop in front of an old wooden shack. “Aunty Jung!” Holding on to the cluster of bread, trying to stifle the rumble coming from her stomach, she knocks on the door and calls out again. But there is no answer. Feeling slightly uneasy and ruffled, the girl pushes open the door with her foot. It creaks open.

 

“Hey, Aunty Jung! Look what I got!” She exclaims, her eyes adjusting to the darkness inside, the only source of light being the fire from the fireplace which would die soon. “The ahjussi from Ocha Tea Shop gave me some extra money today! I got some of that expensive bread! Aunty Jung? Aunty Ju-"

 

But the little girl isn't able to see the look of happiness which would have lit up Aunty Jung’s wrinkled face – after all the bread is from that sophisticated bakery near the InfoCenter where all the rich people work; bread which people claim to be imported every morning from France would make anyone happy right? – because Aunty Jung is sitting on the chair, an apple in .

 

And a knife in her heart.

Foreword

Author's note

*grinning stupidly*

Hey guys xD Um, I return after something like... 12 months? Um #_#

So here's the sequel to a much loved fic of mine, GANJ! Or in other words, GANJ! is the prequel to Diamonds Fall From The Sky (DFFS).

Well, to those of you who're here reading this after GANJ!, WELCOME BACK! >o

And to those of you who don't know GANJ!, guys I hope you'll enjoy this fic.

I'll do my best to write it well, and keep you guys hooked xD

Thank you >< Please subscribe and comment ^^ I hope DFFS recieves the same sort of love GANJ! recieved ^^

Thank you again ^_<


A few important things:

  1. The main characters (viz, Kwon Jiyoung and Lee Jinhee) are the same as from GANJ!. Their names will not be changed (so... to avoid confusion LOL).
  2. This story, being a sequel to GANJ!, reveals the drama that Lee Jinhee and Kwon Jiyoung (from GANJ!) take part in. So obviously, there will not be any connection to GANJ!'s storyline. New readers don't have to read the prequel to understand this story. (But I hope you guys read that too xD)
  3. Unlike GANJ!, this story will not be a romcom ^^ It'll be an entirely different genre... slightly more dark and intense. Does that sound interesting? xD
  4. Um, seriously, enjoy the fic ^^!

Comments

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lolwhat84223343q343 #1
cool story
lolwhat84223343q #2
interesting!
stephanfelix #3
Chapter 4: Omg it seems like your writing about me because I am a combination of both female character I love this story it's different and I like that update soon
tamo_bang #4
Chapter 4: Ok so i read it already :3 and awesome
Just love it and I love Jinhee's character she is just so wierd like a person different than the other ones xD such great character you have here. I'm happy you were finally able to do the sequel & come back and can't wait for the next chapter to come really cx!!! Jajja don't know what to really say i'm just happy and exited about this story
You could say i've been waiting for ir cx
So thanks for the updates
shawol_blingbling #5
Chapter 4: Wah~ I've followed you since the last story Author-nim!! I hope this one will be really thrilling as you stated^^ keep up the good work!!!
sophomoric
#6
Chapter 3: You got some great characters so far. I like how GD is portrayed and the issues he struggles with. It seems like something a lot of idols would think about internally in reality. As for Jinhee... she reminds me of you. I see glimpses of your manner of speaking in her.

So... critiques. Your dialogue in the first chapter is very filler. Especially the second half with Patricia (who's concept I really like too). It could've easily been paraphrased instead. I also thought GD's reaction to hitting the "bear" was unrealistic. He's an idol. He should be thinking about the consequences, especially since this could've easily killed the man and he would be sent to prison. So... it's not just an idol dilemma. Unless there was something that happened in the past or something that absolutely compelled him to do so. And... I think it's weird Jinhee is spilling her secrets to a stranger and I think it's weirder that you know this and still choose to incorporate it in the story. Somehow, I think I would've liked it better if the tragic back story was revealed later when they got closer.

Anyhow, great start so far! I can't wait to see what comes out of this idea.
bacontomycrisp
#7
OMG YES FINALLY YOU'RE BACKKKKKKKK. CONGRATS ON FINALLY FINISHING YOUR EXAMS! Hahahahah I actually already read from GANJ! about the sequel but I didn't have time to come and take a look but then you reminded me again on my wall about the sequel and so here I am!!!! HEHEHEH. I hope this won't get too dark because ASKJDWKAJD Jinhee deserves happiness and I know you're not exactly following the storyline of GANJ! but I really shipped JinheeXJiyong and SeungriXHana so I hope I see their moments here even though it's gonna be dark romance.

ANYWAYS, I'M GONNA GO SUBSCRIBE NOW AND YOU SHALL SEE MORE OF MY COMMENTS ALONG THE WAY AUTHORNIM MUAHAHHAHA. THANKS FOR THE SEQUEL I LOVE YOUUUUU~!
stellarevelations
#8
Chapter 2: This is so unique and mysterious -- I love the way you write! :)
sophomoric
#9
I checked out the description of the prequel of this story and it looked like romcom. And this... sounds like a thriller. How interesting.