Gifted Time

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Separation and death are known as the most inevitable and agonizing  events. Sometimes they are unexpected and the pain is incurable. The moments when we were together and the years that we have been through. Everything is priceless. Everything makes it hard for a person to say goodbye.

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Instead of talking about us, I devoted myself to spread a story about Yixing.

I claimed him as a friend of mine. My friend, Yixing doesn't have the luxury of time.

Until he has to squeeze the spare seconds, Yixing needs to know how meaningful his existence is.

Maybe his mother Lu Fei An, has the answer. Meanwhile Luhan, his brother could help him to understand.

But. Will he get the chance? Time is running out.

 

 

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Staying is optional, leaving is unstoppable. 

It's up to you to decide.

Don't doubt the importance of his imaginarily existence.

 

 

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Foreword

             

  Luhan was thinking about something.

  He traipsed along the way to his home with some tangerines in a black plastic on his right hand. He just came back from Madam Jaemi’s house, one of his neighbours. Since she was moving out, Luhan kindly came to help.

Unfortunately,Luhan never learned that Jaemi was his mother’s nemesis.

His brows drew together as he was deep in thought. “What she’s trying to say?” Luhan folded his arms. He took a break and a heavy sigh escaped between his lips.

He was just a few metres from his home, and he saw Yixing. He was climbing up the stairs and disappearing into the house. His uniform looked dirty. Maybe he had played football before he came back.

"So you have a younger brother, I see." Jaemi said.

The words echoed again, causing Luhan to freeze up. 

“But, I don’t remember your mom being pregnant.”Jaemi doubted Yixing's sudden existence.

“It’s impossible!” He whispered. His mom had said that Madam Jaemi would always say something unpleasant thoughtlessly. He kept it in mind. Such useless critical thinking he had done, he should give a rest already. Mom’s right! 

“Why should I believe such a thing? It’s nonsense!” He grimaced at the thought of it and threw all doubts from his mind. He put a smile on his face and ran to his home. It’s my home, my sweet home!

 

 

 

 

 

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Reminder: This is not . 

Written For De Retrouvailles et D'adieux (A Writing Competition)

Prompts:-

 Theme"Of Reunions and Partings". The happy feelings at a reunion or the sorrow that comes from a parting or death.

Word Prompt: Mizpah-The deep emotional bond between people, especially those separated by distance or death. 

Prompt 14: How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard

 

 

 I will just enjoy writing and i would love to thanks all readers! You guys are very supportive, kind and polite. Thank you for the upvotes, subscribes and advices. I love you all T^T Oh dearest sweeties!

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Credit: Any pictures that I used, will be credit to beloved owners. I only own the plot. English is my second language, so please forgive me for any error :)

 

Dohyeonju
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920506_ #1
beautiful poster
luhaena241
#2
Chapter 16: Uh yeah! Indeed, this story need a sequel ㅋㅋ
Thank youuuu :3
I did really love u, n ur story ofc <3

Keep writing, n fighting!! ^^
Xoxo
luhaena241
#3
Chapter 14: I have some questions but I didnt know how to explain those all to u..
I just try spreading my thoughts through the comments I've wrote hehe.
luhaena241
#4
Chapter 13: Nice!
Thats so sad that Yixing's biological mother taken him away without any request nor even any confirmation!
Luhan also seems clueless so he just thinking that it was 'April.... fool' ?! Lol.
I am sad too, ge :-(
luhaena241
#5
Chapter 12: Oh my, I'm shocked!
I guessed what~.
How bout Lay ge (?)
luhaena241
#6
Chapter 11: Lay ge :-(
Dont write those things!
luhaena241
#7
Chapter 10: Luhan was in a serious disease too. But he just acted likes he was okay. Ge, u should look after urself too~! :-(
luhaena241
#8
Chapter 9: Ohoo I thought that Luhan just found Yixing's diary, n then his suddenly question to her mother.. but it was abt Lay's sickness instead~
luhaena241
#9
Chapter 8: Oh my, I am so speechless. Its so sad~
luhaena241
#10
Chapter 7: Is he just found an envelope? An envelope that related to Lay?
Ah ya, he doesnt know abt Lay's sickness yet, right? While the oppposite w/ Lay! Now their score are same~ ;;)