Present

Description

Onew never thought that he'd spent the best birthday ever.

Foreword

A request from ONKEYsDAUGHTER for Onew's birthday. i'm glad I finished this on time. Hope you'll like it :)

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Purplejaybird #1
Chapter 1: Love this!
lily_bunny
#2
Chapter 1: those comparison of the stars with the members really got me except for jinki's..
he's shining brightly yet humbly because he's adore all s..
thanks for writing this story..
exotaeng_ss #3
Chapter 1: So. Totally. Cute.

I just LUV it~
yapochan
#4
Chapter 1: So cute!! I never want it to end! :') <3 Good work!
onewlover4
#5
Soooooooo!!!!! Precious story Best OTP forever! ♥ love the Author
ONKEYsDAUGHTER
#6
Chapter 1: An, I want moaaaaarrrrrrr !!!!
This is so freaking adorable sweet and cute im crying omgggggggg ♥♥♥♥

So, it was just acting, kim kibum? That drunk thingy?? So you mean, you know that jinki carried you to your bedroom, too? Aegyooo how dare you! Haha

Jinki, so, after you know that all your wish come true, mind to do that ritual (?) again? You can make a wish to *cough* make a baby *cough* or something like that you know. /oh here we go... me and my y mind otl/

"You know, I never thought you'd be the one to confess." HAHAHAHHAHAA this part was soooooooo hilarious, An! Hahahahahhaha why on earth jinki's sangtae should appear in that kind of situation. XD Dont ruin the mood please, jinkiyaaaa

Finally, happy ending for onkey yeayyy! \o/
And happy birthday to uri leader, my prince, my soul and my everything Lee Jinki, wish the best for you. Please long last with Kibum <3
ONKEYsDAUGHTER
#7
WHY I DIDNT NOTICE THAT YOU UPDATE THIS FIC ALREADY ;A;

*brb read*
sapphysw
#8
Chapter 1: Aww~ that is sweet! I like the last line. Really, Onew? You're thinking that far already? This story is so calm. I don't know, I felt that way. Hehe...
XxShawolxX12
#9
Chapter 1: I can't stop smiling. That was so cute ♥
AnotherWriter
#10
Chapter 1: Onkey OnKey Onkey...kyaaaaa~~~~ they are such a sweet couple :D always warm and there for each other...
btw I totally loved this line "You know, I never thought you'd be the one to confess." :D