Chapter 1: woah this is really pretty! again i love the way you use the colors~~

Chapter 1: It's so beautiful;_; idk it's so enchanting the way the colors blend, words blend, and ah Christmas is my favorite time of the year too! :D

Chapter 1: FINALLY COMMENTING I AM NOT COHERENT BUT WHO CARES

first of all, thank you so so much for this! <3 anytime i see someone write Jaeseop/Jiyeon that is not me i seriously fangirl and melt into a puddle of feels (mostly happiness!), you're indulging me here lskadgjkdf <3
it took me a few reads to get a feeling for what the fic was trying to really say (or for me to create a delusional meaning for it, that's cool too i hope skdgajdf) since it's very imagery-heavy so we're all just distracted by the pretty everywhere (because /colors/)!
"He found her to be a rare breed she stood in a way that demanded attention but she shied away when eyes were on her." this pretty much captures my headcanon of Jiyeon? i feel like she wanted to become a celebrity at first because she thought it was cool and maybe she wanted the attention, since she was young when she did make that decision, but i do think, despite her beauty and all Core Contents promotes her as the visual, she prefers to keep to herself/the people she's more comfortable with.
ONTO THE REST OF THE FIC THOUGH: i love this fic because it shows two people in love, but two young people in love. from the way Jiyeon wears outfits that expose her legs in the winter and the way Jaeseop spoils her (which he would totally do, to any girl he'd date skdlfd), you get the sense that they're really living in the moment, not really caring about the consequences or anything. i have this backstory for this fic in my head that Jaeseop, prior to meeting Jiyeon, was more practical/go-by-the-rules kind of guy, but she taught him how to enjoy his life (albeit maybe a little too much). they're in Paris, surrounded by so much beauty, in love, live lavishly, it could be destructive but that's youth sometimes. very hedonistic lskdhskfj.

Chapter 1: Short, but captivating in its own way. The imagery in this is really incredible and I admire the words you use to depict colors.

Chapter 1: I loved it omg the colors and everything about it was really beautiful <3

(psst kiseop's name is spelled kiseop haha)