The Perfect Disguise

Description

“Sooner or later, you would be forced to choose between love and friendship. And when that time comes, trust me, the monster within you would break you and turn you into someone you’re not.

Foreword

Park Chorong, Jung Eunji and Son Naeun, three of the few elite members of A Cube Academy’s student council, have been friends for a very long time. Being the daughters of the three most influential personas of the business industry, they’ve always been the center of attraction and the public’s lovely muses. The three remained friends despite the strong competition between their families, therefore earning the love and respect of the public.

However, the friendship which they though would last would soon be broken by the conflicting feelings they had for each other, by the desire they’ve hidden and by the appearance of another character who would put their friendship into test.

“So, if you were to choose between Eunji and Naeun, who would you choose?” The girl asked, not letting go of the eye 8contact she initiated. “Sooner or later, you would be forced to choose between love and friendship. And when that time comes, trust me, the monster within you would break you and turn you into someone you’re not.”

She is now plastered with a wicked smile as she caresses Chorong’s face. The older girl, who was taken aback by the sudden touch, shifted her gaze and pushed the younger girl away from her, “You…stay away from me…”  She faltered while in the verge of tears, “Yoon Bomi, stay away from me.”

 

A/N: I’m somehow playing with Bomi’s character. She had always been portrayed as a bubbly and light-hearted girl and so I’m trying to depict a darker side of her. Sorry for the vague forewords, I just don’t want to spoil the readers. My first A Pink fanfic as requested by my sister.  Also, the theme is  inspired by another good fanfic I'm currently reading here in asianfanfics.

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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 10: aksjndhajsh kiss kiss!! >3< my thoughts are jumbled skdhnjsudg the kiss~ beautiful beautiful. I like this a lot.. although it takes a moment to get the perspective sometimes, this story is written very well and I'm wrapped into the characters, Bomi's cunning charm and Chorong melting into it. It's gorgeous hehe I love this chapter and the little details in Bomi like when she didn't spill the drinks - that innocence that was also an act bc she had been watching Chorong talk to that person before. Ooh and also I'm just in relief we got to see the result of that chapter teaser hehehe. Thank you for writing this all at the time<3 it just feels special
Lubov17 #2
I know it had been more than 2 years, but every month I check this story, because I don't lose hope that someday it will be updated. It is very well written and the pace is intriguing and the Chomi/Bomi part is flawless. Please, if you ever see this, I would love to read an update, if possible.

Hope you're doing well :)
Lubov17 #3
Chapter 10: This is so exciting and interesting!!! I love how you portrait Bomi here, and everyone to be honest.

And a ChoMi kiss, I am so pleased and happy. But, what will happen now? Please continue, if you can.
ALKimC #4
Chapter 10: Omg why has this never been updated?!?! Please update like omg a charming and cold bomi who everyone falls for. Yes I accept
Msannoying #5
Chapter 10: please update, please i like this fic so much :)
hccc49 #6
Chapter 10: Please update
mwafiq
#7
Chapter 10: DON'T ABANDON THIS FIC!!!!!! this a good one ..Please update
RoyalCouples
#8
pls do not abandon this fanfic this is so good omg
Eririn #9
I am sorry for posting another comment but after reading through I have so many questions. I also have many thought though I am not sure which (if any) is right. It seems like Bomi is back in Korea possibly for revenage against Naeun's family? When she realized Chorong likes Naeun she might use that to her advantage. Naeun seems like she is rather interested in Bomi so perhaps they might get together which will cause a falling out between the 3 heiresses if Eunji is made to pick sides. I didn't expect Namjoo's parents to be helping Bomi. How will Namjoo and Hayoung fit into all of this? I love the school/the heirs background. I wish this were a kdrama and I can't wait for your update. This story is definitely worth my upvote. Plus reading about a darker Bomi is refreshing :)
Eririn #10
Chapter 10: Ahhhhh Chomi kiss!! *explodes*