A Trip : To The Amusement Park

Description

[ONE SHOT] Yoseob pesters everyone to go to the amusement park with him. Looks like Junhyung is the only one willing to go. Guest appearances made by Hyuna and  G.Na.

Foreword

Hello everyone. First, thanks for giving this fanfic a try. It's my first kpop fanfiction, you know. ^^ I'm a huge B2UTY and just absolutely love JunSeob. <3 well, please give this a chance, and give a comment on any mistake I made, critics and comments are really appreciated. :) But not too harsh please. xD

And I'm also thinking about making A Trip series, one shot series that dedicate itself to trips the Junseob couple goes on. ^^ Maybe I will make one, not sure though.

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exomania #1
Chapter 1: aidoo! di ko katigre1
poweroftwo #2
Chapter 1: this is really great~~~~
ILOVEYS99 #3
kyeopta! this 2 are just so freaking cute!
love ur story unnie :D
Jiyeonn #4
aw so adorable :)
orangesun #5
this is so cuuuttteeee! double triple cute> <<br />
junseob is 짱!!<br />
keep writing some more...
starbuckslover #6
awwe this was precious <3<br />
it was just so ... cute! ^^<br />
you should write mores ~ I really liked it
Kastic #7
Your first fic? Impressive!! :O<br />
You mentioned that you wanted constructive criticism... and I love helping pin point things to work on- in order for the person himself to improve. Your writing in general is beautiful; I very much enjoy your style. However, I do have one thing to comment on. After quotes you'll say "said yoseob," "said junhyung," ... etc. You do that more often than needed; sometimes it can just be inferred who said what. It's nothing too bad, per se, but I personally think your writing would be even more beautiful without the repetitiveness. :) <br />
I look forward to your next fics. I really liked this. <3
Rossalie #8
great one-shot! i'm smiling right now because of it ^^ JUNSEOB~! < 3
abclollipop #9
nice one !! love it !! >_<
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