Chapter 3: The first chapter gift is amazing! And I can't imagine it was Sunggyu and IU for the second one. Haha, this is quite refreshing. I've been bored lately and there's this feeling that the IU tag may not even last longer. I can't write anymore so I expect to read more haha.. anyway, haven't seen you around for long! Welcome back!
Chapter 1: omo very interesting.
Luhan and Yixing can't died right? It's so sad T.T
And I want KaiU moments, while Kai is her cousin..ototke >"<
Can't wait next chap..
Chapter 1: hi there.. ^-^
your story is beautiful.. I think you write it with your heart so I can feel it.. you describe it well also so I can imagine it well.. :)
btw, you lacked a spell at 'run for you life' in the body story. it must be 'run for your life', right? I think you just made a mistake, a little mistake.
your grammar? I don't really put attention at it, it's not that I read to check your grammar, right? but I think nothing's wrong.. I understand it well, that's the most important thing, right? :)
anyway, I enjoy it.. keep up the good work.. :D
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