Deceived

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Kyungsoo was definitely caught between a rock and a hard place. In every family there is an old heirloom, in Lim Chaeri's case; it was a golden chopsticks. Kyungsoo is a petty thief, whose been paid to steal the golden chopsticks from Chaeri. The task becomes a bit difficult when suddenly, someone's life is laid on the table.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

 

EXCERPT:

The smell of matellic suffocated his nose. The vision of her tearstained face begin to blur as he realized what had gone down. Looking down at the blood continuing to seep through his fingers, Kyungsoo dropped on his knees. "Give me a hand?" 

 

*author's note:

This story is written as a entry for Karma's First One-Shot Contest.

As I was writing I had these new ideas keep coming at me. More twists and twists so I had to re-write a lot of the parts. I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but oh well. I know there are going to be some ( maybe a lot o n o ) of grammar errors. I'm not very good with them orz. Anwyay, it was fun writing it and hopefully you'll be surpised of the ending ^^

 

Result from Karma's First One-Shot Contest.

Deceived didn't win any of the First through Third place, but it did win the Special Prize. ^^

 

 

Prompt:
Character: ZE:A's Siwan
Genre: Angst
Item: Chopsticks
Line: "Give me a hand."
Event: Betrayal

OST:
A Teardrop - Kim Greem
 

 

 

 

  
DO KYUNGSOO                                      LIM CHAERI
19 years-old                                                                                   17 years-old
 

 

DISCLAIMER:

©Copyright nanasway 2013; All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind without the permission of nanasway is strictly forbidden.
- I do not own any exo, ulzzang or any other idol's in this story but I do own the plot.*
Again, no printing or redistribution allowed. Do not post this story anywhere else. No form of copying, plagiarizing or saving allowed. Do not translate, I do not give out permission to anyone. No part of this story may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without prior written permission of the author nanasway. Any violations will be reported and immediate action will be taken.
You have been warned.
 
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Fan_of_Karma #1
This story had lots of twists in it xD I really loved how you used your prompts :) Congratulations on getting the Special Prize ^_^
kangsoohee #2
Chapter 1: what ??? why didn't you make them to be together author-nim ? T.T
Fan_of_Karma #3
This sounds very promising! I especially like the idea of the chopstick being a family heirloom xD
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