Chapter 33: It is a very different story with a very different vibe. A lot has changed between the first version and the second one. This one is more... I don't know how to explain it well without sounding weird... mature ? The way you wrote it shows you worked on it and that you have more experience into writing than you used to.
You changed a lot, and not only the HimUp. I absolutely love YongGuk's character here.

The way you wrote the DaeJae has changed at 90%, I'll say.
Yeah, I do remember pretty well the 1rst version, because it left me a strong impact. I can remember clearly you also changed the song but I can't quite remember the previous one.

Now that I've read it all, I still can't tell which one I like the most. They are too different to be compared as you don't focus on the same things in both versions, and there are too much change for me to be able to fairly compare them.

I will now conclude this comment by thanking you. Both are masterpiece and they should be more widely known for their quality. (or its quality since the 1rst version is now gone).

P.S. The question in my previous comment is still valid. Please answer someday if you see it ;) I wish you all the best for your future project ;) You do have talent ;)

Chapter 5: Hi ^^

I don't know if you will ever read this comment but still, I'm trying my luck and typing it to you.
I already loved - there are no stronger words for me to express myself, because it truely was a masterpiece- the very first version of this fanfiction. I was in love with every aspect of it.

It can pass as rude to compare the new version and the older version, but I have a very different vibe coming from this new version. I haven't read enough to tell you if I like it better or not, but I can tell you I'm still curious enough to go on reading this version.

I am pushing my luck again to ask you something. If you do still have in store the previous version of this story, can you please share it again with us, as the story of the very first version was a lot different from this one ?
If you don't, it's okay. ;)

I'll go back to reading :)

Chapter 33: Thank you for writing this masterpiece <3

Chapter 19: I don't usually read , but this, this has pulled at my heartstrings. This whole story and especially this chapter, when they finally meet each other. It's beautiful. It's utterly, undeniably beautiful. Glad I took a chance and dived into this. Thank you for the story.

Nice one, author!

Chapter 33: Love this story.

S nice of story ^^

Nice story!

nice story!