A Heart Turned Cold

Description

I was only a one out of millions of people standing by the sidelines,

I loved him but knew that he would never love me.

But one day, he approached me,

He said he loved me and I was so happy.

I thought I was dreaming,

When he held my hands.

I thought I was flying,

When he kissed my lips.

I knew that he was my everything,

And hoped that he thought the same way about me.

But when winter comes,

The time which is the coldest,

My heart turned cold. 

 

Foreword

 

A/N:

Hey~ It's me, theangelvampire. I do hope you have not been disappointed by me thus far :>

This story is about how love changes during the fours seasons and it is featuring woogyu (the couple i ship most in infinite). Although none of them are my bias (well, it's myungsoo), I decided that writing about them would be fun :>

Anyway, I hope you will enjoy this story and as always, critical comments are welcomed. 

 

Progress: Complete :)

 

A/N:

This is written on 4/11/13. 

This fanfic is coming to an end and I will be writing my thoughts about it after the last chapter. To put it simply here, I think this is really not good enough and has some weird parts. I really need honest opinions on this fanfiction so tell me what you think. Thank you :)

 

A/N:

this is written on 5/11/13 when the fanfic is finally completed. I just hope all of you weren't too disappointed because well, I am quite disappointed with myself. 

I originally thought of this idea when I was reading this very very sad fanfiction and it was orginally for a contest (but i gave up halfway because there wasn't time lol). I believed that the plot has a great potential but i think I kind of destroyed it. :<

To the people who unsubscribed, are you like disgusted by my fic or because it's complete lol :/ as always, comments are appreciated. Help me improve! <3

 

A/N:

this is written on 22/11/13. It is just to credit Sehun Review's and Recommendations Café for the review :) I'll definitely edit it. Thanks a lot to them and well, you can request there :> They have ungraded reviews if you are embarassed or what not about scores lol. 

 

Comments

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Infnt791
#1
Chapter 5: Sunggyu you jerk :'(
hamstergyu28 #2
Chapter 5: I cried so bad :(
blacksea #3
this is good.
exoandoreos
#4
Chapter 5: Why so sad :'(
smugyu
#5
Chapter 4: Sunggyu.. You're so bad. Oh ihy for hurting nam's heart
smugyu
#6
Chapter 2: unnie, when will you update this story...?
smugyu
#7
Chapter 2: Cute. so much :D
svnthvn
#8
Chapter 2: IT'S SO CUTE!!!!!