Sketching Futures

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 P R O L O G U E 

 

He walked carefully in the hallway, not wanting to bump onto anyone. When people stared at him, he began to coward like, they were going to hit him, when the truth was no. They won’t. In fact, they looked at him in amazed. Truly amazed.

 

“Hey, Jongdae! Thanks for the drawing,” a muscular guy said, grinning to him while proudly showing two thumbs up. He went nearer to Jongdae and freely linked his arm on the other guy’s shoulder. “You’re gifted, man. I just want to say thank you again because I owed you.” Although his face was fierce, his smile, indeed, could melt all hearts.

Jongdae hesitantly nodded. “N-Not a big deal, Yongguk-sshi.”

“Well. I think, my buddies want to know whose their future girlfriends. They all drown in enviness because of my girl.” He chuckled. “Since you can draw the futures, why don’t you try sketching for them too?” he winked.

 

And when someone,
wanted to know their futures,
Kim Jongdae just couldn’t say no.
He just couldn't refuse to sketch their futures.
 
 

 

Foreword

 

 

 
“I want to sketch your future. But it is too late.”

 

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21st September. Okay. Okay. Okay. 
CHENCHEN, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Oh my goodness. I love you, Chenchen. <3
So, it's obvious that I made this story for our beloved Kim Jongdae!
This will be short. But, I really hope you enjoy it and this is also for a competition. :3 
That's all and don't forget to SUBSCRIBE, COMMENT COMMENT AND ENJOY.
Also, love our Chen moreee~ Kamsa hamnida. *excuse my grammar mistakes*

 

 

 

 

 

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Byun_Rara
#1
You wrote this on 2013 and only now i found this story. T_T
_nrlfatihah
#2
Chapter 1: Its painfully beautiful ❤ i love it :')
alejojaz000
#3
Chapter 1: I'm crying now :(
MaiEliss97
#4
Chapter 1: ONE OF THE BEST one-shot story i've read.
Lemon06 #5
I ♥ your short fiction story! Keep it up!
krusty
#6
Chapter 1: Amazing. Loved it to bits. It was sad for Jpngdae to lose his gift and for Jongin sadly coming off as second best. It's bittersweet for him. At least he had tasted happiness, but in the end, he conceded to his cousin.

Overall, it is well-written. I think there is a typo where you put 'except' instead if 'accept' somewhere. Otherwise, it is perfect ;)
junhyung_atiq #7
Chapter 1: Ohmaigod author-nim! This is amazing! In the end she chose Jongdae and I'm glad! The heart can't lie I guess. To have Jongin to at least give a chance to the girl eventhough it would hurt him shows that he truly care :') I am anticipating more of Chen fics from youuuu ♥
-natsukim #8
Chapter 1: Ah, when I read the last part, I just realized that the boy is Jongin, not Jongdae like what I've mistaken before
-natsukim #9
Chapter 1: Oh my English! I didn't get the last point. Did he die or not? What's the meaning of she's gone?
btw, a goof fic you have here^^
s-ogogi #10
Chapter 1: omo! i thought chen is going to die!
so that's mean she's going to chen, am i right?
oh my chen chen, you make me fell over chen again and again!
thanks for this beautiful oneshot^^