The millionaire's wife

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Kim Jiyeon, a shopaholic married to multimillionaire Kim Sung Gyu comes into the realization of her ever loved husband being a skin-flint miser. Where would this lead their four years long marriage to? Will it be gone for good? Will anything change?

Or will the very truth make the bond they shared stronger...and finally eternal?

Foreword

“Who am I of yours?” He asked, and I was shocked by the question.
His tiny eyes had fire in them, which produced sweat around my neck. I stared at him, unable to speak.
“Who am I Kim Jiyeon? Answer me.” I gulped, and noticed how beautiful he looked when he’s mad, but I was too busy to think of that, I had to answer.
“Kim Sung Gyu …my husband, and the owner of Kim Dynasty…”


 


 


 


 


 


 


 

This is my entry for the 'give me a year' contest.

Contest link; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/353347/a-writing-contest-apply-contest-writing-you-competition-writingcontest-gmy

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el6713 #1
Chapter 1: why so short? make a sequel please. this is so good.
EggYeol #2
Chapter 1: omg this story, can you make a longer chapter? because the plot is good
khinaye #3
Chapter 1: Another good short story in which the author is able to present things from two viewpoints. First, the reader feels sorry for the wife who has become a shopaholic because she feels she's been emotionally neglected by the husband. Then when the husband reveals that his company is facing bankruptcy and then the wife realizes that her prodigious spending doesn't help towards her husband's financial problems, we readers realize how the author skilfully manages to show two different viewpoints looking at the same problem. She makes the story credible and also the love between the husband and wife shows that the man will be able to rise up from the ashes with the help of a loving wife and child. Maybe, the couple should also try to be more communicative in the future, as neither has tried to tell the other what he/she is feeling, how the woman is feeling lonely and neglected and how the husband is trying to get a grip on the finances of a company on which hundreds of employees are depending for their livelihood.
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