The Last Straw


"If only we could erase our memories.

At this moment, I envy those who can't remember atleast they won't feel the pain of the ones who can."





The Last Straw




"You said we  could have our forever."





"I don't believe in forever anymore."











author's note:

  • First of all I wanted to thank you for reading the 27th of October. I could not believe many people would read so I am beyond pleased when many people read it TT^TT You made me so happy. You guys are the best!
  • Second, it will make so much sense if you read The 27th of October before reading The Last Straw because this story was a side story and a continuation (somewhat) and this will have the following chapters:
  1. Prologue
  2. Before
  3. During
  4. After
  5. Epilogue
  • The before, during and after refers to the before, during, and after the baekyeol story in The 27th of October. I made this side story to focus on Kaisoo and to answer all that was left behind in The 27th of October.
  • Again, thank you so much.


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junofluteplayer #2
Chapter 6: Haha should have names it 25th of October as Kaisoo day because it was the day jongin was going to propose. And it makes me sad that of all my favorite people in every fic I read. Kai dies. Why Kai? I mean... He's the dancing machine. Lol seriously though.
izzadipatuan #3
Nice one :)
vamospetra #4
Chapter 6: Author-nim, I really hate you right now for making me cry so hard, but at the same time I love you so much for making me cry so hard... i think my love is greater... but still... i can't stop crying and i barely see what i'm typeing. I've already reread it so many times but this story makes me cry every single time. I promised myself not to read it again for a long time but the news about the alternate ending made me change my mind, so now i'm really really exited to read it. It feels weird to be exited and sad at the same time >< someone please, help and tell me a joke or a happy thing or anything ><
cyd4294 #5
Chapter 6: omg did i miss smth? in 27 october i remembered jongin said that he can keep the secret. he's there but why here ;;
derpybabyowl #6
wait umm... in 27th of October Jongin was there with Kyungsoo in the end in the school hall or something, but why is it mentioned here that he died with Baekhyun in the crash?? Im really confused right now
dokyungsoolabb #7
Chapter 6: It was so heart is breaking..i can' usually not a fan of angst..y did i came and read 27th of october and now this?? heart couldn't take it..wae author-nim? Wae?? T__T i held you responsible for my poor heart.
avelric #8
Chapter 6: lakjlkaflksd when I finished reading the 27th of October, I was crying but then I thought, "hey, at least kaisoo got their forever," and I was all excited to read this, but then I get to the middle and I feel like something's wrong, and I FIND OUT THAT JONGIN IS ACTUALLY DEAD WTF LSKDFKFJ WHY WHY WHY WHY OK JUST WHY WHYYYYY. ARE YOU DETERMINED TO BREAK ME OR SOMETHING?!?!?
but yea this was awesome. ^^
mayree #9
Chapter 6: OH MY GOODNESS!!

This is soooooo depressing...

I can't! TT______TT

Btw, great job for making me cry, author-nim!
mimimimi_ #10
cliches #11
You know what, screw this. Someone lend me a soundproof room and let nobody to come in except me. //cuz I want to cry so badly that I might scare all living things in this world with my wailing later//
Authornim I just love Jongin so much. But you know it,that's why you did that to him right? I love you too authornim.