The Last Straw


"If only we could erase our memories.

At this moment, I envy those who can't remember atleast they won't feel the pain of the ones who can."





The Last Straw




"You said we  could have our forever."





"I don't believe in forever anymore."











author's note:

  • First of all I wanted to thank you for reading the 27th of October. I could not believe many people would read so I am beyond pleased when many people read it TT^TT You made me so happy. You guys are the best!
  • Second, it will make so much sense if you read The 27th of October before reading The Last Straw because this story was a side story and a continuation (somewhat) and this will have the following chapters:
  1. Prologue
  2. Before
  3. During
  4. After
  5. Epilogue
  • The before, during and after refers to the before, during, and after the baekyeol story in The 27th of October. I made this side story to focus on Kaisoo and to answer all that was left behind in The 27th of October.
  • Again, thank you so much.


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sugar_ #2
Chapter 6: Chapter 6: why did u kill both of them?
dear god!!
crying my eyes out
Arinah #3
Chapter 6: i cried a lot while reading 27th october and the last straw. my heart js breaking into small pieces.

i cried a lot while reading 27 th october, but i cried even harder when im reading this.

my heart :'( i just want kaisoo to be forever.... why must jongin die??? :'(

you're an amazing writer... thank you so much for making me rwalise what forever and true love means...

although i felt like banging my head on the walls bcs i really cried so so hard... kyungie and jongin deserve their forever... :')

keep on writing good stories, authornim...

may God bless you always.

thank you, i've now know what forever and true love means.

saranghae, authornim x
Haru_XOXO #4
Chapter 6: My kaisoo feels! !!!! Why author nim?!!!
noarin #5
Chapter 6: I'M SOBBING SO FREAK Q.Q actually i don't believe in 'forever' it just a word ;-; but kaisoo have they forever ;-; i'm leaking Q.Q
ohheyitzkat #6
exokaisuhokai #7
Chapter 6: i can't take this anymore...i 'm sobbing..... i'm depressed,,,,,,,,,,,, eopimqwpyr3nct[9m'x,q4cu34ct4uqvnnc how i contain my feels????????????? please tell me!!!!
junofluteplayer #8
Chapter 6: Haha should have names it 25th of October as Kaisoo day because it was the day jongin was going to propose. And it makes me sad that of all my favorite people in every fic I read. Kai dies. Why Kai? I mean... He's the dancing machine. Lol seriously though.
izzadipatuan #9
Nice one :)
vamospetra #10
Chapter 6: Author-nim, I really hate you right now for making me cry so hard, but at the same time I love you so much for making me cry so hard... i think my love is greater... but still... i can't stop crying and i barely see what i'm typeing. I've already reread it so many times but this story makes me cry every single time. I promised myself not to read it again for a long time but the news about the alternate ending made me change my mind, so now i'm really really exited to read it. It feels weird to be exited and sad at the same time >< someone please, help and tell me a joke or a happy thing or anything ><