When I'm With You

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He spills coffee his been drinking all over his shirt and on the floor and Key and Amber eyed at him mischievously. He just keep staring and he’s not sure he should even be talking in case he happens to say something he shouldn’t say but he manages to mumble out a compliment. “You, uh, you look really nice.”


She narrows her eyes at him. “No, I don’t,” she snaps and she almost sounds offended. “ I look like terrible.”

"Yeah," he says, off Sulli’s murderous gaze. "You look…bad. Really hideous."

Her gaze flickers to him, her eyes looking a little hurt. “Is it that bad?” She turn around while trying to see herself with her ballgown. He can’t stop looking at her. He’s like standing on the edge of a cliff and it’s his own damn fault if he falls. ”You look really beautiful,” he says honestly, genuinely, because she does and she deserves to know.

A smile lights up her face and she laughs. He looks at her face as he involuntarily thinks to a night, standing in under the moonlight, his hands gently  her hair, her arms around his neck, her lips against his lips - no.

"I have to go," he sputters suddenly, hurriedly going to the door. He manages to slip a little on the spilled coffee and he hears laughter from Key, Amber and Sulli behind him.

"Bye," she calls after him, sounding faintly amused. Her eyes in a smile as she watches him going. "Yah! Key, you’re cousin is really weird."

His now inside his car and his head against the steering wheel.


The line is drawn. This has to end.

 

“I think I’m falling in love with you, I spent this everyday thinking about you, and I thought I could be your friend, but every time I look at you, I just want to kiss you, and that’s not what friends do… I kept trying to make it go away, but how do you kill a feeling?” Minho thought while shaking his head.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

No foreword for this story.. sorry... cant think of any..

 

hi everyone.. zooey here.. 

this is my first try to write a story...

hope you'll support this fanfic..

sorry if this would be too cliché to some of you..

I’ll try my best to make this good..

just feel free to read, subscribe, comment and upvote..

I would love to hear your feedbacks..

 

Thanks a lot in advance.. =)

 

 

 
 
 
zooey17
i'll be back next weekend.. thanks for all of your support =)

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Muthu123 #1
Chapter 17: Pls update
Tulipa #2
Chapter 17: Thank you for coming back, please keep updating :)
purnamas #3
Chapter 17: yeah ..i always to support minsul
no matter what ><
next chapter??
zangsia1 #4
Chapter 17: Wow they finally kissed
What is the next part?
Thanks for update autgornim
jhanehojas #5
Chapter 17: tnx authornim minsuI forever......fighting.....
nana4ever #6
Chapter 17: Yeah!!!!! Finally the kiss. I hope they can go public about their feels..... But now that they have graduated i they will be busy.

I was happy to see your update. I hope all is well

Have a good day.
miraclelove99 #7
Chapter 17: Thank you for the update authornim.. MINSUL LOVE FOREVER!!!
anne9779 #8
Chapter 16: I'm reading your story... Please update soon...
it a great story...
Minsul-4ever
#9
Chapter 16: UPDATE soooooooooon ... Interesting story ^.^
peach0603 #10
Chapter 16: Omg please continue. I love what's giving on so far. I hope they will see each other soon. Hahah destiny. Update soon authornim