Identitas

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Description

Everyone has an identity. Real or fake, everyone has one. Sometimes people live under another identity virtually, but what if people do that in real life instead?

There will be a moment in our life, when we’ll find out that we didn’t know at all the ones we thought knowing very well. That’s when they reveal their true selves; their true identity. And then we realize that not everything we see is what it seems to be.

 

Characters

Main:

 

Zhang Yi Xing / Lay

"I can only be thankfull that I met you."

 

Baek Cho Hee

"Everyone thinks I'm this girl they can deceive and lie to. I'm getting sick of it."

 

 

Additional:

revealed throughout the story ... 

Foreword

Excerpt

I walk towards the wooden bench and sit there, feeling the cold breeze of the night. I inhale its smell and it feels so nice and refreshing. The silence makes the moment just more beautiful. Although there’s this silence, I can still hear the wind and the distant car horns down there.

I so needed this time for myself, where I would be able to be alone and think about everything. I abstain myself from the world and enter on my own, as I lay on the bench, facing the night sky, filled with those bright points I so love to observe.

People look a lot like stars. When we see them from afar, they all seem beautiful and harmless, but once we see them up close, we discover that their brightness and beauty isn’t anything we thought it was. If we see starts up close, they are just giant spheres emanating light and heat. The same goes for people, if we look inside their souls we see that they’re not like what they seem on the outside, and that’s the most disappoint thing in life.

“Why is life so disappointing? Why are people so disappointing?” I question out loud. Maybe for me to hear it myself; or even for anybody who’s around and is able to hear my words. 

And then I hope Lay could be here to answer my questions or even Jeong Suk. I think, the ones who disappoint might be the right ones to answer those two questions.  

 

Author's Note:

 

 

Annyeong! (^.^)~ My next work is a chaptered fanfic with ... Zhang Yi Xing or also known as, Lay! That's right. This is the time for Mr. Cutie Dimples to be the star.

So, I've being trying to upload this fanfic since long ago, but with other sudden creations I was unable to upload it earlier.

Hum, this is kinda different since I'm writing it in the present. I'm used to write in the past so ...

I hope you enjoy this fanfic and ALWAYS comment. ^^

As it is an habit of mine: Don't forget to subscribe, comment and upvote! :D

Chu~ / XOXO and have a nice time reading my story.

P.S: I'm sorry for keeping revamping the story. :c I hope it won't happen again.

 

Credits to:

 

 

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[On Glory's Edge] The Reviews for the review. Thank you. :) I'll make sure to request again once I complete the story. ^^

DobuOnew
11-4-14: I'm sorry to inform you that i'm going on hiatus. I'll try to surpass the writer's block and busy school life. sorry. :c

Comments

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lovidovi #1
Chapter 9: Hey! Lay's asking her to meet on rooftop! Hahaa, he's feeling guilty.
Looks like the date will be... I don't know, let's see what will happen :)
lovidovi #2
Chapter 6: From the perspective of an amateur writer like me, I think your grammar is good :) It's easy to read. I'm drowned in the flow of the story. I did think it'll be slightly angsty from the impression of your description and foreword. What I get now is that this is seems kind of slice of life. I enjoyed it so far, by the way :)

After I read it until here, I think I really loves her brothers. Turns out that Chung Hee cares for her, even though he seems cold at first.
Cho Hee's crush for Lay made her waiting in the rain for him, ahh so cute! I wonder what will happen between them next. Also her close friendship with Luhan, they are really close, right? They had just met in the morning, but they meet again in the night :)
Well, I gotta continue later!
lovidovi #3
Chapter 3: So far, we know about Cho Hee's family situation, her friend and the new guy. Hmm, why did Luhan do that to her? Mystery, mystery... I love Cho Hee and Chung Ho interaction, such adorable siblings :)
relau99 #4
Chapter 6: It's interesting! I smell fluff on this chapter hahaha
Great job ^^
relau99 #5
Hey! I can't read much right now so I only read until chapter 2. I can't say anything about the plot just yet because of it but I really like your writing style.
I'll try to read more later ^^
RiRiCassiEXOtic
#6
Chapter 4: Lay with curly hair?? aww i can't wait for their next meeting!!!
off to read the next chapter :D
XingCloud
#7
omg! i need an update!!!!
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#8
Chapter 12: awww The Jinri-Chunghee romance is so cute :3
I finally want to see how the date goes! >.<
personally, I would have made Chohee go barefooted because it's kinda romantic but I don't know if this plays in the summer so I guess it's good she put on a pair of vans anyway ^^

really liking this, update soon ♡