Falling Down

Description

 

"I would do everything for you, if you only could see me spending nights awake trying to know... What was my mistake that made you grow distant?" 
 

Foreword

Zhang Yixing didn't expect too much for being a SM trainner untill he found him.

Then they were best friends, it was easy to see the feelings that were growing in Lay.

They were inseparable.

 

They were...

 

 

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HI :3 it's JiggyB1A4Love again :D

I know I didn't finish the first story I was writing but the ideas flew out off my mind, this is another one I hope you like it :3 I wanted to write some Kray fics because I still can't find that fic that makes me feel like its happening right now in front of my eyes so...

 

ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE +~+ So if there are some mistakes tell me and I will change it :3

 

Please enjoy the fic and subscribe!

This storyline is created by me, any other fics that look a like with this one it's only pure coincidence.

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HzLicious #1
Chapter 18: i’m sorry,but your story is kinda make me confused.your plot is confusing,and your POV is a big no no.sometimes you said ”he“ and than you changed to “i“ in one pharagraph or worst in one sentence.you had a lot of grammar mistake,misspelling,incoherrent text.and who’s the hell “Rio”?is this a translated story?
bizzyMe #2
Chapter 18: Finally.... After thousand year waiting for ur update. Omg! Does Baek saw Lay at tue restaurant? And now, they will be staying at the same hotel. Update soon, please.
KaihunKray #3
Chapter 17: I still dont get aim of Suho. What the hell wrong with him? Why???He fall in love with Xing? That's the only reason to hide Xing by his side?
fr_unicorn #4
Chapter 17: okay, i'm a lil bit confused here. so suho is not with the rest of the members for almost 2 months and he's taking care of yixing, right? yixing is man/namja/male, right? so maybe i spotted your mistake by addressing yixing as "her" not "him" in the third scene. because it takes me a while for kept thinking that yixing is a girl now until i read how he called suho as "hyung" instead of "oppa" ahahaha lol at me.

anyway, suho, dear, can i smack your head for keeping yixing with you instead of revealing him to krissy that he's not dead? aigooo i ship kray soooo badly.. hahaha
update soon, author-nim^^ thanks for keep updating~
bizzyMe #5
Chapter 17: okey... this is just getting interesting! hope they will meet the short memory lost lay at the Lotte World. can't wait for the updated. fighting! :)
fr_unicorn #6
Chapter 16: krissy, lay is fine.. but he doesn't remember about you.. this is so sad ands heartbreaking T_T i really ship krislay sooo badly so this is breaking my heart T_T gonna be waiting for another chapter then.. update soon, ne? :)
KaihunKray #7
Chapter 16: what the.... O_O
Jeje_KrAyson #8
Chapter 16: oowwhhhh this is rly asdfghjkl..lay is fine kris, but he is don't remmbr abt u >_< wohh i want to tell kris the truth but i can't LOL
KaihunKray #9
Chapter 15: omg.. omg...omg. TT___TT
fr_unicorn #10
Chapter 15: what?! who's kris?! he didn't remember who is kris? uh oh this is bad.. taozi why are you so mean here?? TT___TT update soon, author-nim :)
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