Cold Spring

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Cold
Spring
A STORY BY AWESOME_HEE






"EVERY HURTFUL THING HAPPENED DURING SPRING."

 

 

Foreword

 


It started when winter came as I met my destiny on the street under the light. I will be looking forward and anticipating to knowing everything about him, but what should I do when my life is only as short as I expect ? -Rin-

 



Characters

 

♕ Marius ♕

• Marius.

• Happy-go-lucky. 

• Likes to be with Rin. 

• In a relationship with Sayuri. 

• The most popular in school.

• 16 years old.  

 

♕ Shori ♕

 • Sato Shori.

 • Rin's ex-boyfriend.

• Marius's bestfriend.

 • still likes Rin after break up. 

• 2nd most popular in school. 

 • 16 years old.

 

♕ You as Rin-chan ♕

• Haruka Rin.

• Likes Marius. 

• Shori's ex-girlfriend.

• Impatient. 

• 16 years old.

 

 

♔ Sayuri ♔

• Sugawara Sayuri.

• Popular in school.

• In a relationship with Marius.

• Tries to be close with Rin.

• 16 years old.

 

 

Author's Notes

Hi there! Thanks for taking time to read my third fan fiction. It's about a teenage love story. I hope you like it. Don't forget to subscribe! ♡

Thank you to ‘Circ Du Fr3ak Request Shop’ for the beautiful poster!  Be my friend? Just add me and I'll approve it c:

 

 

©ALL RIGHT RESERVED BY AWESOME_HEE
LAYOUT BY VANILLERY 2013.

ADVERTISED BY KLOYOLA FROM CUTE SWEET, EYESMILE ADVERTISEMENT SHOP, THE CUPCAKE ADVERTISEMENT, S-J-Y-I ADVERTISEMENT AND VENUS ADVERTISEMENT SHOP.

REVIEWED BY JESSIE14 FROM BESTFRIEND FOREWORD REVIEW SHOP AND BAPBLACKJACKVIP FROM BANGTAN EXCLUSIVE REVIEW SHOP

 

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jessie14
#1
your review is posted :)
jessie14
#2
hello :) owner of BFFRS here ^^ i just completed your review but i will post it in the next two days once one more request is finished by another staff.
it should be in the next two days or so, so please keep a look out for our shop on your subscriptions list :)
thanks for requesting :D
kloyola
#3
Chapter 6: ahh!! I like the ending, it was perfecto !!^^
Marius and Rin got together in the end, though they both died, it's still a happy ending.
I love them so much.. and Shori too, of course.
the gifs are awesome, haha, Shori so cute when his mic was pulled..
Thanks for this !!^^
xian_hee97
#4
Chapter 5: so I have no idea who Marius or Shori are but this story is really good. Love the plot, the characters, and this ending (chapter 5) is awesome. Hahah,I thought Marius had lost it. Talking to Rin's picture and giggling at himself...tsk tsk poor guy x)
kloyola
#5
Chapter 5: woah!! ok, it totally changed, and it turned awesome!!
Is that really Rin? the girl in the last part? I wanna know.
Oh!! Shori, why? why didn't you tell to Rin's aunt that you're not her boyfriend, and Marius is? ugh!! why?!! but still I like him, hehehe.. update soon!!^^
kloyola
#6
Chapter 5: Oh my!! I don't know how to feel about this right now, am I supposed to be scared because Rin is showing herself to people who are still alive and she even take a form of a teddy bear?
Why is Marius in Rin's hospital room? he wasn't there when Rin is in the hospital.
Shori is hurt when he saw Rin showing herself to Marius and not to him!! ugh!! I don't know who should be with Rin, Marius or Shori?
Marius is getting crazy about Rin being alive, still.
there still more? update soon..^^
I already listened to the songs you told me, I like Kento's Candy can you be my baby? it's so cute !!^^ It's so funny that Kento's song is about how she loves the girl, while Fuma's song sound like he's hating the girl for being Fake. two different songs.
kloyola
#7
Chapter 4: oh my gosh!!
the tears are falling again, the sadness, ugh!! why?!!
I feel so bad for Marius. And the couple bracelet, ugh!! why does Rin have to die?!!!
Why did Rin showed up to the three? there's a reason behind it, and I wanna know!! update soon!!^^
I just recently searched for HSJ, because you told me to, and wow!! there are a lot of members !! and their song Super Delicate is great, I searched for the english lyrics and the chorus has this part 'There's a face that I show only to you'. it was great !!^^
smhaera
#8
Oh you came with an epilogue. Yes!!
kloyola
#9
Chapter 3: Oh my gosh !!
why does it has to end that way?!!
ugh!! I can't help but cry, my heart is aching as well.
I want Marius and Rin to be together, oh I wish it was a happy ending, but it turned out to be the opposite.
I love this story, thank you so much for this.
to be honest, I'm not a jpop fan at all, more of a kpop fan, but when I read this, maybe I'll also be a jpop fan because of Marius and Shori.^^
smhaera
#10
It is completed. The endings T_T