Last kiss (ONESHOT)

Description

It is not easy for them. They have lost friends because of this. It is their conversation after Taemin broke down, not being able to go on with their relationship anymore.  It's a short story, so that's the short description.

 

This is my first story ever being uploaded to any sites. Please do tell me what should I do to improve, or if I should stop writing. T_T

And the story will be based on Minho's POV

Foreword

 

 

 

Choi Minho

"I missed you. Let me hold you for a bit longer."

 

Lee Taemin

"I was hoping for at least a perfect goodbye kiss."

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2minspice
#1
AAAWWW SO CUTE AND LOVELY...<br />
"... let's not make it the last…" <= LOVE IT SO MUCH <3
TheSHINeengBoyfriend #2
i thought this will have a sad ending =.=" but im glad its not!!! XDDD LOVE THIS!!
bajikcrazy
#3
awwww...<br />
do u plan on writing a sequell?<br />
if yes,i love to read it xD
pRiMa_ElF_gRg
#4
2MIN FTW!!! Nothing can separate them
dawn_0330 #5
2min is LOVE!<br />
xD<br />
It's sweeeeeeet!
Ingwang609 #6
AH AH!!! nothing in the world can break 2min!!!! 2min hwaiting!!!! tanks a lot i almost cried myself...it was too sweet and cute!!!^.^
blue_toast
#7
@B3_M1N3: Thanks for the generous compliment. But, I don't know about a sequel. I had no idea what to write about. =_="
B3_M1N3
#8
Wowww!!! There has gotta b a sequel to this perfect story!!!:)
blue_toast
#9
@fanfics_addicts: Ahh... tq2. ^_^
fanfics_addict
#10
ah, it's just to cool >__<<br />
"It was a perfect kiss, let's not make it the last…" i like that word xD<br />
great story ~ keep writing ^^