Take a deeper look at me, cinder-Jay

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He was adopted. Treated unfairly by his parents and his brother, jinwoon. The girl he fell in love with fell for his brother. And when she broke up, she has someone else in mind already. When his life suddenly gets better... WAY BETTER, will his love life be? What about you, the so-called-fiance that would be with his side, listening to his story about his crush when you've fell for the guy already? are you going to stay by his side, praying for the chance with him to come? or are you going to choose Jonghyun the guy that obviously have a crush on you and would stop at nothing to make you happy?

 

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Foreword

 

STARRING:
JAY PARK

YOU

G.NA

JONGHYUN

OTHER ARTISTS

 

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My previous fanfic:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/22148/a-little-too-nice-beast-gdragon-junhyung-korean-leejoon-mblaq

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/25238/that-guy-s-daughter-2ne1-beast-chaerin-junhyung-korean-ljoe-teentop

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/30976/just-a-responsibility-korean

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/36796/you-re-letting-me-go-but-i-don-t-want-to-jonghyun-kikwang-you

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/38182/she-s-our-assistant-not-just-yours-shinee

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/40149/i-ll-take-care-of-her-hyuna-junhyung-korean-you-zico

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/35277/you-re-not-a-sidekick-jonghyun-key-korean-leejoon-mblaq-shinee-you

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/40914/you-re-a-good-actress-but-you-can-t-fool-your-heart-chaerin-jonghyun-korean-leejoon-you

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/43392/endless-waiting-gongchan-hyuna-jinyoung-korean-krystal-you

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/45497/because-you-re-my-person-gna-jinwoon-junhyung-kikwang-korean-you

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/51368/take-a-deeper-look-at-me-cinder-jay-jaypark

 http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/55467/it-s-hard-to-love-an-over-protective-brother-sequel-to-you-re-not-a-sidekick-n-a


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This story is originally created by me:)

do not plagiarize or redistribute :)

©2011 By Seoulchae 

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Enjoy reading it!D

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thanks

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2011/06/22 wednesday

Seoulchae ©

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YunaJi #1
Chapter 10: Ohhh my goooshhhh shes the girl that Jay doesn't want to leave when they were young right?! RIGHT?! OMGGGGGG!
ilove_minho123 #2
Awww this is so cute! :)<br />
dongwooed
#3
Aww this is such a warming story (; I love it <3
seoulchae
#4
thank you!!! :)
bitterswee-t
#5
Kyaa, i really like how there's two endings! (: Makes us readers have like a path to choose in a way! ^^ Good luck with your new fic! ^^
seoulchae
#6
thank youuuuuu!!!!! :')
Coprolite
#7
cute endings :)<br />
really liked your story ^^
ohmyyoungbae #8
awwwwwwwwwww. thank youuuuu!! :D
seoulchae
#9
thank you!!<br />
i already made the forward and 1st chap of my new fic .<br />
:)
-Wanderlust-
#10
I love the ending. Glad you made two ending for both of the guys. The pictures are nice. Can't wait to read your new fic.:)