The Undesired Ones

Description

Characters: 

V:

  • Only turned into a vamp once he turned 18, which is when a vampire fully awakens through their DNA.
  • A 21 year old male vampire. Not the typical vampire, he hasn't been living forever, he was born 21 years ago and eats normal food, however also drinks blood b/c it is like how water is to humans, he won't be ableto survive without it.
  • Doesn't trust females after his mother abandoned him as a child for money. Only reason she stayed for so long was his inheritance.
  • His father was also a vampire, before getting killed. 

Nara: 

  • A strong willed girl who's mother died in a car accident at the age of 9 years old.
  • Her father re-married a woman who hates her, but Nara is kind to her step-sister and mom, she doesn't know that she's hated by them b/c they don't fully show it.
  • Doesn't cry easily and doesn't depend on others. 
  • 19 years old, just finished first year of university , was coming home for the break.

(Side Character with many interactions) HANA:

 

  • Younger maid that befriends Nara.
  • Is also a vampire and has been V's maid since he turned into a vampire.
  • But not as strong as V who is of pure blood.
  • Is also 19 years old.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

'thoughts...' equals what the girl is thinking

'thoughts...' equals what V is thinking

My first fanfic, please don't hate, and comment lots! :)

I know that the couple may not seem good, but i just want the characters to look like them, not saying that they look good together or anything.

Also please tell how I could improve my stories! Thanks!

Luv,

Sophii <3

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SophieAnnaLee
I hope you guys enjoyed it and will continue to check out my stories, if you like! :) Thanksso much once again! My first fic is done

Comments

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Natasha_Vx #1
I love this story so much!! It was amazing!
YeonieJung
#2
Chapter 18: Oh my gawd.... You got me there for a second... Oh well.... Great story!!!! I loved it!!!! ;3
alejojaz000
#3
Chapter 18: Gray love story
Fardiah #4
Chapter 18: WOW SO AWSOME!!!! I so LOVE this story ^_^
cheekylittlechubba #5
Chapter 18: The best vampire-gumiho story ever!!!!

I really enjoyed it ^^

Great job authornim :D :D
EunkyungLee #6
Hi! Please pick up your trailer. Thank you. - C'est La Vie
btsluver123 #7
Chapter 18: *sniffing* why my y v kissed her
SpicyRiceCake
#8
Chapter 8: In some part of this chapter you called her NANA is her name NANA or Nari
Inspirit_world #9
Chapter 18: A nice story yoooowwwwwwww.^_^. I'm gonna miss them a lot. ;)
SyerrySunshine
#10
Chapter 18: V's character are kind as a vampire...It's something new I ever read.You're a brilliant writer.