Turned

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One night introverted Sehun goes to a club with his best friend Jongin, where he meets Jongin's sort-of-boyfriend Luhan. Luhan seems perfect, but Sehun quickly learns he's keeping a secret. By the time he finds out the truth about Luhan it's too late.

Foreword

 

Sehun peered up into the darkness of the fire escape. He wasn’t sure, but it looked like there was something crouched up there. Like a dog. A big dog.

The animal opened its eyes and Sehun saw a flash of red. The club door opened at the same time, spilling multicoloured light into the alley.

“I thought I saw you come out here.”

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sparksfly7 #1
Chapter 14: I haven't properly read an EXO fic in years and something made me want to reread Bittersweet and then I found out that you had other stories so I came to read this. And I have to say - wow. Just WOW. This is amazing and I wish I found it earlier. The world you built was amazing. I've read stories about werewolves before but never like this. The things you came up with, like purebloods and commands and perfect mates, work so well together. I love how intricately you weaved the plot and how you gradually unravelled it so that there were plenty of reveals and twists but it never felt contrived or forced. I gritted my teeth at how selfish Jongin was or how angry Baekhyun was, but it was realistic. They're people with flaws.

And omg as much as Yifan had been the big antagonist, when he sacrificed himself like that for Junmyun and told him that he was sorry but didn't live to see Junmyun say he forgave Yifan - I legit cried. I haven't cried at a fic in a long time. Bravo! I thought that Sehun was going to choose to remain a wolf just to stay with Lu Han, or that he'd choose to be human but they'd meet again and I do have to say the latter works better. I didn't think about how Zitao would come to his senses now that he wasn't a wolf anymore but that's such a relief. He and Jongin being together is so cute! And Chanyeol and Jongin being roommates who prank each other - awwwww. It's also clever how you explained Sehun's memory loss as being a blur rather than a gaping hole and how he would find himself distracted before he thought about why he couldn't remember.

And Lu Han, oh my god, From him saying on the train that he can live with Sehun never forgiving him but he can't live without Sehun. And all the angst Sehun caused because he thought that Jongin was Lu Han's perfect mate! Omg Sehun, Lu Han never gave any indication that he bit or wanted Jongin, you thick-headed, insecure boy! But I'm glad that by the end, Jongin and Sehun are good friends again and Sehun is over his jealousy. And I really didn't expect Sehun to remember Lu Han but man either they're perfect mates or even something beyond that. My heart! Thank you for this <3
Palak27 #2
Chapter 14: THIS WAS A GREAT STORY! AND I REGRET SAYING THAT I HATED BAEKHYUN. I LOVE HIM AND I AM SORRY BAEK BABY. I LOVED THIS STORY EXCEPT FOR THAT JONGDAE AND BAEKHYUN DIED. THAT JUST BROKE MY HEART.

Thank you @author for writing this amazing story. I really loved all the characters even yifan and the plot was great too :)<3
Palak27 #3
Chapter 10: Ohhh HOW MUCH I HATE BAEKHYUN RIGHT NOW!!!
Palak27 #4
Chapter 2: So luhan lied! ??
veIvetdiamond #5
Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Awwwww! The tears I shed from the previous chapter paid off!
The epilogue was short, yet satisfyingly sweet. I'm glad most of them actually got their happy endings--I mean, after all those painful moments, they deserve it. Thank you, Author-nim, for sharing this work with us! I loved it! Keep up the good work!
I'd really love to see more from you!
veIvetdiamond #6
Chapter 13: This chapter...IT'S TOO SAD!
I can't believe it! Almost every part is a tear-jerker!
I'm so sad! I don't think I'll be able to sleep after this!
veIvetdiamond #7
Chapter 10: AaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhHH!
More plot twists! I'm gonna die from all these bombs the author is dropping here and there!
veIvetdiamond #8
Chapter 9: AH! Plot twists are being dropped one after another!
I'm having these mini-heart attacks just from reading!
veIvetdiamond #9
Chapter 8: Boom! Mic drop moment right there!
Sehun, stop talking over when elders are trying to tell you something!
veIvetdiamond #10
Chapter 4: NO! NO! NO!
SEHUN, GET YOUR FINE BACK HERE! A GIRL'S GOTTA SEE HER SHIP SAIL!
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